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Nex del Vida -> ERROR: SYNTAX Comments (11/19/2008 20:04:42)

This is a short screenplay I wrote, inspired by this video. Things like that have happened quite a bit over the past whenever--that is, movie trailers for movies that aren't real. I may or may not actually film this trailer (and/or the movie) with my friends, but anyway, this is what the ad for the movie would be.

It would be a tongue-in-cheek comedy: people would say incredibly nerdy things in incredibly serious voices. There will be more references like the over 9000 one. All of the characters will be named after mathematical things--Desmond "Decimal" Howard, Frank "Fractal" Wilshire, etc.

Read away!




r0de0b0y -> RE: ERROR: SYNTAX Comments (11/23/2008 14:47:44)

Genius. Truly genius. Very interesting concept that makes me fear math even more. You know what's sad? I actually get most of these terms. I got about two or 3 chuckles out of it. The thing is, you mighf want to make the stage directions stand out. I do hope you'll actually film this one day.

*divides by 0*




Nex del Vida -> RE: ERROR: SYNTAX Comments (11/30/2008 19:13:13)

Oh hey, a comment! Hi RB. Long time no see. (Rhyme.)

No stage directions? Why in Euclid's name not? I have to have stage directions or it isn't a screenplay. How else would I convey that stuff?




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