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Gianna Glow -> Green's Scripts and Screenplays~C&C thread (9/15/2009 12:40:09)

Hello again! I havent posted any of my scripts, but this is something I really do enjoy. I will be posting several different scripts I've written over the years, some will be better than others. The one I have up right now is by far my favorite to write. It is called "Operation Overlord". Basically, its a screen play that is based off of Peter the Overlord's list. Anyways, I will be updating this with different things, some random, and some awesome. Hope you enjoy!

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Operation Overlord

~GG



Mistermafio -> RE: Green's Scripts and Screenplays~C&C thread (9/16/2009 13:03:19)

Well, I certainly don't see a lot of screenplays around this place, and since I had some time to spare, and was interested, I decided I'd drop in and give my two cents for once.

This first scene was most certainly interesting, I found most of the jokes to be entertaining, though not exactly my kind of humour. Since it is supposed to be an introduction scene there's not a lot I can really say about things like characters and so on. Though from the looks of it your evil villain is maybe a bit too simple for what he is supposed to be.

To me this guy comes over as he's supposed to be this cunning genius that doesn't quite have his hand on the situation and a rather bad temper. Which is a good character. Yet I feel he is just a little /too/ hot tempered, and not quite evil and genius enough... If you get what I mean.

Other then that I really have nothing to say, other than simply: put up more! Now!



Gianna Glow -> RE: Green's Scripts and Screenplays~C&C thread (9/17/2009 0:44:19)

Lol, thanks! This is supposed to end up as puns on every villain/hero movie out there, however this villain learns from his mistakes slowly but surely (He makes all of them in the book, then learns what to actually to do... there is going to be a lot of hero slaughtering.). He's dumb right now, but he will get better is my plan. I plan to film these soon... and they are supposed to be a super cheesy prop/scenery. I also envision in each "mini-episode" a different hero and villain. I will explain why eventually. Thanks though MM!



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