Change - A Short Story

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.::oDrew -> Change - A Short Story - Comments (10/1/2009 11:53:41)
Change. Not quite done, but done enough that you all can read it and tell me what to do next. Thanks.

ringulreith -> RE: Change - A Short Story - Comments (10/4/2009 10:07:30)
Umm... It's good, I didn't find any mistakes or gramatical issues... It just sort of let me hanging... I liked it, anyways. Please continue it.

Angel of Grief -> RE: Change - A Short Story - Comments (10/4/2009 10:19:39)
The ending was pretty...abrupt. :/ But otherwise, i liked it. :3

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