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Alixander Fey -> Oracle Shift | [Comment & Critique] (2/10/2010 6:21:33) Friends, Romans, Countrymen: Shall we dance? ORACLE SHIFT Enjoy.

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ringulreith -> RE: Oracle Shift | [Comment & Critique] (2/12/2010 19:19:12) I'm confused...

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Alixander Fey -> RE: Oracle Shift | [Comment & Critique] (2/14/2010 17:57:11) Haha. Of course! I can't tell you everything in three scenes! I just posted three more. I'll try to go a little faster in the future if people are reading.

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ringulreith -> RE: Oracle Shift | [Comment & Critique] (2/14/2010 22:38:43) Uh, can you explain what you mean by "pull" and "push"? Also, you need to paragraph your quotations, like so: Billy was walking down the street. He bumped into Joe. "Hello.", greeted Joe. "Hi. How're you doing today?" replied Billy. "Very fine, thanks." answered Joe. Billy and Joe walked down the street, enjoying the nice weather.

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Alixander Fey -> RE: Oracle Shift | [Comment & Critique] (2/19/2010 8:22:51) Push and Pull are both actions and people. A time Push can Push time; or, speed it. A time Pull can Pull time; or, slow it. All that is explained in context. There are mind Pushes and mind Pulls, force Pushes and force Pulls. I never infodump but the context is clear. And I do paragraph my quotations. If there's one I've forgotten point it out and I'll fix it.

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