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jerenda -> RE: Collection of Short Stories -CC- (5/29/2010 21:53:14)
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Okay, I really like the idea of shortcut keys, but there is a flaw- I can't just search TD1, I have to search for the third usage of TD1, because you use it three times in total. Most people just hyperlink directly to the post- at the end of the post are blue words saying Post #: 2, and if you click that hyperlink it takes you to a page from which you can hyperlink directly to the specific post using the [link ] [/link ] codes. However, if you really like the idea of shortcut keys, I suggest making the TD1 part invisible by using [color=#EEEEEE ] [/color ], again with no space before the end bracket.
The Dark- Does not have a very good hook. I'll try not to be too cruel, so tell me if I am and I'll try to keep it down, but still. The beginning is not interesting, and by the time I reached how you're different I had a healthy wave of skepticism going. There is a random bracket at the start of the third paragraph. However, at that point it starts becoming interesting, and the ending actually gave me a little shiver, because that's exactly what I think too. Drat, I have to go, but if you remind me I'll finish this later.
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