Balu -> "A creative corner"--Comment Thread (5/28/2010 18:06:15)
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Hello and welcome to the place where I am hoping you will post your thoughts, opinions and suggestions for improvement regarding my poem thread. I`m balubamboto(balu for short) and first I want to give a little bit of info on myself and why I am here. It all started 4 or so months ago when, out of the blue, I decited to try and write my first ever poem. I had just joined a Paxia clan so I wanted to write something about that. What came out were 2 poems actually, that you may have already read in the "Book of War". And that is pretty much it. Been writing poetry ever since. Another piece of info that I want to share is that in my poem thread I want mainly to post poems from my own past or present experiences. And most importantly I would like to say that my english is not that great especially with verb tenses; and that I didn`t pay that much attention when I was in school so some isues may arise... Hoping on your feedback that I will use to try and better my work, I have posted my most recently finished poem.
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