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not steve -> Three Castles, Two Walls. - Comments! (6/19/2010 13:02:51)

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Story Here

You guys like to read? Cause I am pretty long-winded. Looks like steve is back eh? Well, I am afraid you are mistaken, for I am not him. I swear. Originaly this was an RP, but I've gotten ahold of some free time and decided to write it as a story. I apologize for mistakes in the first chapter, but it was written quite some time before the second (an entire semester with english course ago actually). I'll fix them if anything is really sticking out.

But anyway, does this need an intro? I suppose so, the basic idea is that these two towns (Vit Mear, and Topour) are fighting for control of the temple to their water goddess Vallira. She, by the way, has nothing to do with the spanish company I discovered just now by googling that name. Are you guys into spoilers for what is to come? Because I have a lot of ideas that I can barley resist documenting here, but I shall. I expect that this will quickly become hard to follow, as it is an entity almost entirely of sub-plots, with the main one not being very clear. How will it end? I haven't really decided that, I find it hinders more than it helps to decide that a long way ahead of time.




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