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tflo -> The Everyday Adventures of a Ghost: Discussion Thread (7/27/2010 8:46:14)

Everyday Adventures of a Ghost

Any comments are welcome.




stromy -> RE: The Everyday Adventures of a Ghost: Discussion Thread (8/3/2010 15:59:52)

Interesting idea.

One thing I noticed is that some of your paragraphs talk about multiple topics. If you start a new paragraph when you change topics/ideas, it will make the story a lot easier to follow along with.




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