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Anoril -> Gorrillaphants and Seed Spitters (8/28/2010 16:10:58)

A Short Treatise on the Symbiotic Relationship existing between Gorrillaphants and Seed Spitters

It's been a real long while since I've posted anything in L&L, or written much at all in fact. My opinion was that what I had written a few years ago was pretty awful but you know I read some of my own works just now and I actually think I was kinda good...weird.

Anyway, this piece isn't a story at all. It is a study into the relationship between Gorrillaphants and Seed Spitters.

The original idea formed in my head years ago when i wondered why the gorrillaphants and seed spitters would, as a team, attack the mill. I came up with a few theories and now that they have shown up again together in AQW and now that I am apparently a ZooKeeper and Gorrillaphant wrangler, I thought it was time to really figure this out.

If anyone knows how to use superscript on these forums it would be appreciated. 9 stars isn't good is it?




Acient J -> RE: Gorrillaphants and Seed Spitters (8/28/2010 21:40:03)

I really enjoy your writing, so I'm glad you've finally done more! I haven't finished reading yet, but it seems very good so far.

I'm not sure if it's possible to do superscript, but you could try color-coded stars (e.g. * * * *), color coded whatever-these-things-are, ^ , and merging footnotes *** and ****, as footnote **** is simply an extension of footnote ***.

Edit: I've just finished, and it's really amazing. By the time I finished, I was looking not into the world of a 2D RPG but of a complex magi-ecological system. Well done!




Hallie Slidepath -> RE: Gorrillaphants and Seed Spitters (8/30/2010 8:33:00)

quote:

Why is chooses to eat Gorrillaphant meat but

I suspect that "is" should be "it", and that's also the only typo I could find.

Ever since the Arcangrove release my interest for both Gorillaphants and Seed-spitters have been sparked, and it feels like this study was written at exactly the right time.
I have to agree with Acient J, this really added new depth to the World of Lore, and it was a fun-fun read (see, not one, but two fun's!)

"The distinction between adventurer and monster can be difficult to make."
This sentence really made me smile, partly because I suspect that it displays the writers opinion about adventurers passing by and farming Gorillaphants for their own selfish reasons, and partly because it's something I've been working with in my recent writings as well.




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