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Nytewarrior -> Chasing Shadows Comment (11/15/2010 20:35:12)
http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=18338427&mpage=1&key=� This story is a work in progress, so feel free to be as brutal as you can be.

Fleur Du Mal -> RE: Chasing Shadows Comment (11/17/2010 15:52:27)
Hiya! I read the brief Prologue you've posted so far, and it looks so far, so good. =) My eyes caught some -purrhaps unneccessary- repetition with the words "Chaos" as in "forces of Chaos", but for a Prologue, it might even work that way better. I hope the chapter 1 is coming on nicely. =)

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