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a person 1991 -> (DF) The V.o.i.d's revenge (11/25/2010 17:45:11)
Starting plot ( Sorry I forgot to put this in ) : The is the story about 4 (very) young adults . Who are having a difficult life . 2 of this (very) young adults know each other and the other 2 are brother and brother . They will find out why everything happend in their lives . They will make difficult choices . All in this exiting story ! Genre : Adventure , Fantasy , ( Some ) Suspence , and Drama ( I know it may be a little boring to read but it's something i'm slightly proud of ) ( And yes , I am new at this ) ( Also , agian i try to keep as G rated as possible ) If you want to comment on this story please comment on this forum : http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=18375199&mpage=1&key=� ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Chapter 1 : "The 4 letters" Part 1 : " The bloody door" alarm clock : * ring , ring , ring ! * Valerustis : (VERY LOUD) YAWN ! ugh .. it's 5:45 am ... why do I smell fire ... what the heck happend here ??? GAH! Valerustis's mom : Wake up ! it's 7:00 , you over slept ! now go take care of the horses and what not ? Valerustis : Yes mom * sigh * ... taking care of the horses hmmm ... Valerustis's mom : we ran out of milk and fruit and go to the store and get some . Valerustis : Fine ... * OUTSIDE THE HOUSE * Valerustis : Hey Ottel , how's it going ?? Ottel : Hey ! Not much , you ??? Valerustis : not much either i'm going to the store to get my mom some food and whatnot ... Ottel : Ok I bet I can beat you to the store . :P Valerustis : yeah ? You really think so ? Ottel : Yeah ! I really think so ! * When they get near the store * Valerustis and Ottel : * Gasp * * cough * Valerustis : heh ... you won this time ... Ottel : Yeah ! [:D] well I gotta go my dad wants me to " train " me to be a knight . Valerustis : well good luck with that !!! Ottel : Thanks , bye ! * At Valerustis's house * Valerustis : Hey mom i'm ... What happend here !?!?! * Valerustis mom bleeding on the floor near the front door * * Few seconds later the house is burning * Valerustis's mom : In a weakend voice Go to your father coughs blood at ... * Dies * [:(] To be continued ... ( Oh and I rate this ages 9+ i say mild words like stupid , dumb , and like i said * coughs blood * ) Please do not use signatures in the archive. Signature removed. Kindly, Fleur Du Mal.

a person 1991 -> RE: (DF) The V.o.i.d's revenge (11/26/2010 13:07:56)
Chapter 1 : "The 4 letters" Part 2 : "Running away" IN THE TOWN OF SANDSEA Istnick : hmph . Just another day like always ... Alone here in sandsea ... Dan : Hey Istnick !!! Istnick : What ? can't you see i`m resting here besides I don't wanna be caught by the guards , so will you please keep it down ! Dan : Sorry , sorry . Anyways , I heard there was a rich guy , around the corner from here . He is moving , so quick before he moves out! Istnick : Heh , I bet other bandits are out there also ... Dan : True . So are you gonna sit out here or are you gonna rob some people ? Istnick : Is that a R.E.A.L question? Dan : For you ? No not really . Istnick : " LET'S GO !!!! " Dan : What I thought ... * Running around Sandsea * Istnick : Try to keep up ! Dan : * pant , gasp * Istnick : y'know I don't wanna stay here in sandsea I wanna head out to moonridge or falconreach . Dan : Are you kidding there's necromancers , deathknights ... Istnick : * Interrupts * and Paladins ! Come on we'll be fine ... Dan : But I hate the dark ... Istnick : ... Fine then why don't we settle in oaklore keep or falchonreach . Dan : Ok then off we go ! * Running past sandsea * * Ran past valencia's zone * Istnick : FINALLY ! Falchonreach ! Dan : Wow ! Even have a guardian tower . One of the last surviving ones ! Istnick : Ok i'll go into the inn and cheak us in , I want you to steal some weapons or gold or something useful ! Dan : Sure I can do that . * Dans steal about 600 gold and got a HALF-OFF morning star ! * Dan : Hey Istnick ! I got a morning star ! Istnick : Umm is that a half off one ? Dan : yeah .... but I got 600 gold !!! Istnick : well at least you got some things ... anyway , I got us a room and it's 5 gold a night so we gotta do some stealing ... Dan : Sure I can always do that . To be continued ...

a person 1991 -> RE: (DF) The V.o.i.d's revenge (11/26/2010 13:23:08)
CHARACTER BIOGRAPHY'S ! _______________________ Valerustis : A 11 year old boy . His house recently burnt down and the loss of his mom . He never knew his dad , his mom always told him he's somewhere but alive . He also his a friend named Ottel ( cheak his biography ) Base Elements : Fire and Energy Secondary Elements : Evil and Metal Likes : Running , doing chores . Dislikes : Secrets and evil . _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ottel : A 10 year old boy . Friends with Valerustis . Dreams of being a knight . His dad trains him . Base Elements : Water and Ice Secondary Element : Disease and Silver Likes : Training , dreaming , and running . Dislikes : Cats . _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Istnick : A 13 year old boy . Trained ranger and knight . Reacently moved from sandsea . Now lives in Falchonreach with his brother Dan . ( see biography for dan ) Both parents died by sandsea guards . Base Elements : Wind and Darkness Secondary Element : Poison and good Likes : Money , weapons , and Falchonreach . Dislikes : Sandsea guards . _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dan : A 9 year old boy . Partly trained ranger by his bother Istnick . Reacently moved from sandsea . Now lives in Falchonreach with his brother Istnick . both parents died by sandsea guards . Dan has a thing for stealing . He's young but very effectent in battle . Base Elements : Earth and Light Secondary Element : Nature and ??? Likes : Adventure , having fun . Dislikes : Sleeping .

a person 1991 -> RE: (DF) The V.o.i.d's revenge (11/26/2010 22:50:36)
Chapter 2 : "Endless space" Part 1 : "Appearences" * IN THE TOWN OF FALCONREACH * * IN ISTNICK'S ROOM* Istnick : * DREAMING * ??? : You will die a bloody death ! Istnick : GAH! * panting * * gasping * My gawd ( i did'nt wanna spell g--d ) it was just a dream . Istnick : I wonder where Dan is ... heh is always out having fun stealing , never liked sleeping ... SOMEWHERE ELSE IN FALCONREACH * Valerustis : * Sob , Cry , Cough , Repeat * Ottel : Hey stop * Sobing , Crying , Coughing , and repeating ? * Valerustis : Your right I should be a man and TRY to be more optimistic . Ottel : Stay at my house ! Valerustis : You know that is a great idea ! * As there walking towards Ottel's house * * Dan smacks into Valerustis * Dan : Ow ... Valerustis: Hey try to be more careful next ... Dan : INTERRUPTS I'm really sorry ! ( How does Istnick run so very fast but does'nt hit into people ???) * AS ISTNICK FINDS DAN THEY ALL GET INTO CONVERSAYTION * Istnick : So Dan this is where you've been . Istnick : So what are your names ? Valerustis : Well , my name is Valerustis . Ottel : My name is Ottel . Valerustis : what are your names ? Istnick : My name is Istnick . This is my brother Dan . Istnick : Anyway , where are you heading ? Valerustis : Well my house burnt down and my mom was brutly murdered by i don't know who , So i'm staying over ottel's house . Istnick : What a terror that must have be ... * A VOID DRAGON APPEARS ! * TO BE CONTINUED ...

a person 1991 -> RE: (DF) The V.o.i.d's revenge (11/29/2010 20:32:07)
Chapter 2 : " Endless space " Part 2 : " Valerustis's secondary element " Valerustis , Ottel , Istnick , and Dan : O....M......G ! Valerustis : How the heck are we going to defeat this thing or whatever it is ??? Ottel : Run , scream , call for help ! Istnick : C'mon we can defeat what this thing is ! Dan : What the heck is that ??? Valerustis , Ottel , Istnick : WE DON'T KNOW ! Dan : Great we are going to battle a thing that looks like a dragon , and we are not even KNIGHTS! Istnick : I am a trained knight and ranger ! Valerustis : But you can't do it alone ! Istnick : Eh true ! Void dragon : Thinks : * They talk so much I just want someone to fight me my gawd * Void dragon : JUST FIGHT ME ALREADY! Valerustis , Ottel , Istnick , and Dan : That unidentified thing talks ? Void dragon : I do ! I'm a dragon you know ! Thinks : * Wait are this children are the 4 letter prophecy ? * Valerustis , Ottel , Istnick , and Dan : What kind of dragon ?!?! Void dragon : A Void dragon ! Ottel , Istnick , and Dan : What the heck is a void ? Valerustis : Thinks : * Can it be ? * Void dragon : Ugh do I have to explain it ? Valerustis : * Interrupts * Let me explain ahem a void is a corrupted place with bassically nothing in it only void dragons , void elementals , and other weird twisted monsters . Thinks : How did I know that? Void dragon : And i`m gonna start killing you ! Istnick : Thinks : This looks like that monsters in my dream ? Could it be ? Void dragon : You will die a bloody death !!! Isnick : Thinks : * My gawd does everyone have weird dreams like these?* * BATTLE SCEANE ! * Void dragon : attacks : Valerustis , Ottel , Istnick and misses Valerustis : a burn in his heart start to overwhelm him then a burst of ( Element : Evil ) light starts to burst Void dragon dies Ottel , Istnick , and Dan : MY GAWD HOW DID YOU DO THAT !?!?! Valerustis : * Coughs blood , pant , deep breath , and repeat * Ottel , Istnick , and Dan : Are you ok ??? Valerustis : I`m fine . Istnick : thinks : * weird his name is Valerustis , his name is Ottel , my name is Istnick , my brother's name is Dan ... Which means !!!!!! To be continued ...

a person 1991 -> RE: (DF) The V.o.i.d's revenge (12/5/2010 16:35:25)
Chapter 3 : The element of ???? Part 1 : Never trust ... Istnick : Thinks : * Naw it can't be i mean our first letter names spell V.O.I.D ! * Istnick : You know guys our first letter names spell v.o.i.d ! Valerustis , Ottel , and Dan : That is creepy ! Istnick : We should go sneak some books ! Valerustis : I`m bad at stealing ! Besides why can't we just borrow ! Istnick : Borrowing ? I was rasied to steal !!! Valerustis : Well , you`ll have to get used to it ! * Borrows books from the town hall * Valerustis : See was not that hard BORROWING BOOKS! Istnick : Ehh whatever ... Valerustis : Ok it`s getting dark ! Ottel : We where staying at my house remember ? Valerustis , Istnick , and Dan : Oh yeah ... Ottel : So .. let`s go ! Dan : Why does your house to be near doomwood ? Ottel : Stop complaining ! It`s not That bad ! Dan : I hate the dark ... Valerustis : THINKS : * I wonder what that thing was and what is a void ? * Dan : Hey theres a merchant , i`ll catch up with you guys ! Dan : Hi merchant ! do you have anything for sale ! Merchant : * STARES AT DAN * Dan : ARRGH!! Thinks : * When did I get bloody ??? * * Dan drops into a mysterious hole * Dan : Where am I ?????????? To be continued ...

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