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Corruption_Vash -> Wasteland Diaries (2/7/2011 5:32:03) Wasteland Diaries

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Shreder -> RE: Wasteland Diaries (2/7/2011 7:52:52) A promising beginning, I look forward to reading more of this...

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Corruption_Vash -> RE: Wasteland Diaries (2/7/2011 9:22:38) Do you, Shreder, or are you just being polite? xD And since you might be familiar with my UCaG characters, you may realize why I have chosen Nevest as their names, as well. Not too hard to figure out. I think I'll introduce some action into Chapter One, Zero being somewhat of a bore as it was to serve as an introduction to the Fallout universe.

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Shreder -> RE: Wasteland Diaries (2/7/2011 10:28:41) No, when it comes to critiquing stuff I'm completely honest. [;)]

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Corruption_Vash -> RE: Wasteland Diaries (2/7/2011 10:50:26) Fair enough. I've written a portion of Chapter One already, but I'm refraining from posting it as not to continuously edit it to fill in the rest of the chapter.

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Corruption_Vash -> RE: Wasteland Diaries (2/9/2011 10:29:44) There, Shreder [my only reader >_>]. I posted chapter one.

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Shreder -> RE: Wasteland Diaries (2/9/2011 11:38:29) Give it time, it's an interesting story, and will (probably) attract more readers in time... Anyways, another interesting installment, with no real mistakes jumping out at me for correction, I guess all I can say is that, again, I look forward to the next chapter...

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Corruption_Vash -> RE: Wasteland Diaries (2/9/2011 21:39:20) Well, so long as I'm entertaining at least one person's mind, then, well, I'll keep writing. Chapter Two posted, titled "Invisible Prisoner". Not to be taken literally, but metaphorically. May or may not get it now, but you will in time. Consider it a hint.

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Oddmanthefirst -> RE: Wasteland Diaries (2/16/2011 21:14:35) Haha. I found an error! In other words, you can't count [:)]. It is supposed to be Chapter Two "Invisible Prisoner", not Chapter One "Invisible Prisoner". Other than that, I enjoy the story so far. Congratulations, you now have two viewers!

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Corruption_Vash -> RE: Wasteland Diaries (2/19/2011 0:16:09) Eh, might've lost that viewer with this late of a response. And that error is due to copy-pasta'ing the title format and forgetting to change Chapter One to Chapter Two. Thanks for telling me I can't count, though. T_T I guess I'll do C3 soon enough.

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