Rebirth Commentary

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Krey -> Rebirth Commentary (3/24/2011 21:35:33)
Here I venture from the RP Forums, trying my hand once again at writing something on my own and this time actually putting it out for people to see. Herein go your comments if you have any. Below is a link! Rebirth

1412. -> RE: Rebirth Commentary (3/26/2011 16:12:06)
Very nice work. I could not find any errors whatsoever. I also appreciated the descriptions that you gave in the story. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

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