The Journal needs Criticism

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#Garete# -> The Journal needs Criticism (4/6/2011 9:10:15)
Story RL is messing with me,so I'll complete as soon as I can.

demolitiondragon -> RE: The Journal needs Criticism (4/10/2011 6:28:23)
Just letting you know I read it. One thing I did notice is that you need to put spaces after punctuation. Just a tip. [;)]

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