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Eric Greydawn -> Comments for Greydawn's Legacy (5/9/2011 16:10:11)
Post your comments here guys. Any questions I will be glad to answer, if I am able to. I PROBABLY should have already had this in there. And sure, I will comment as I am able... just remember, I am going to be here only a short amount of time each day as I am working on other things as well.[;)]

Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: Comments for Greydawn's Legacy (5/9/2011 16:16:34)
Where's the link? And does this mean we will be getting feedback from you as well?

Mordred -> RE: Comments for Greydawn's Legacy (5/9/2011 16:24:26)
quote: They say it sounded incredibly evil. Terran swears fell upon Lorian ears I bet.[:D] A good start. For organization, have you tried using [hr] to show changes of scene/passages of time instead of ###? I feel that the former looks neater.

Eric Greydawn -> RE: Comments for Greydawn's Legacy (5/9/2011 16:27:36)
I could, but the pound sign page break is traditional. It's something I have had beaten into me by my own editor. I hope you guys enjoy the story. I am going to fill in gaps that won't be touched on in game.

Mordred -> RE: Comments for Greydawn's Legacy (5/9/2011 16:32:46)
Filling in gaps? Then you'll be able to solve the whole SoulAllies were SoulWeavers in a previous life thing? Because it's an issue much like the chicken and the egg. You need a SoulAlly to be a SoulWeaver, so then, how do SoulAllies exist in the first place? :P Anyways, I'm very much looking forward to this. And I smell you writing a quest featuring Kappas soon...

Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: Comments for Greydawn's Legacy (5/9/2011 16:33:54)
Hmm, it's a nice beginning, but I must ask when this story plays. By the way, should you ever bother to read my story I'm filling in gaps too. I wonder how many people have noticed by now ....

Eric Greydawn -> RE: Comments for Greydawn's Legacy (5/9/2011 16:44:41)
Mordred. These are gaps that will be in MY story line. I can't fill in gaps in other people's story lines. T'wouldn't be appropriate. I CAN tell Eric and Artemis Greydawn's stories though. Dwelling Dragonlord, this will become apparent later. Well, Mordred, there WILL be more insights into his activities as a DoomKnight, but where it will be seen, or what form those insights will take is utterly dependent on a number of different factors. I can't go into details right now, as I am not sure of them myself.

Mordred -> RE: Comments for Greydawn's Legacy (5/9/2011 16:50:41)
Bah, I was merely joking. Hence the ":P". :P Will there be flashbacks of what Eric was doing as a Doom Knight, or will that more be in-game(seeing as how this is a gap-filler for presumably your in-game story)?

Shadow Ravena -> RE: Comments for Greydawn's Legacy (5/9/2011 17:22:19)
Interesting. First story I've seen with a taking armor to be sure... Well, can't wait to see what happens next!

Mortarion -> RE: Comments for Greydawn's Legacy (5/9/2011 18:41:21)
appears from a warp portal behind Greydawn HAving problems with an armor, hahahahhahahahah, living so much time in the eye of terro makes you fuse with your armor literally points to his arm where there are pieces of metal fusing with the flesh, well great history I must say congrats

Glais -> RE: Comments for Greydawn's Legacy (6/16/2011 4:31:43)
Hm, well that was interesting, I like how everything sounds all....for lack of a better word, Samuraitastic. Reminds me of a book I once read called...uh...what was it called...I'll get back to you on that. EDIT:AHA! It was called "The Samurai's Tale." I like a lot of the foreshadowing of what seems will be happening in game, the added detail helps to smooth out what won't be there I guess.

Mortarion -> RE: Comments for Greydawn's Legacy (6/16/2011 6:31:14)
I loved the new chapter, I can't whait for the next one' ofc I wait impatiently for your saga in-game Eric

Gingkage -> RE: Comments for Greydawn's Legacy (8/29/2011 6:53:11)
quote: So deep in thought was Eric that he did not hear Artemis until it was far too late. A dagger thudded into the mat less than an inch from his left ankle. Probably my favorite two sentences so far because it has a well-trained soldier being surprised by a woman. coughsuperiorgendercough JK. I have absolutely nothing constructive to say in case you hadn't figured that out by now. Excellent start so far. Can't wait for the next segment.

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