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zanathos -> Comments on Thunder's Might (5/19/2011 21:04:13)
This is the space for comments on my Herosmash story, " Thunder's Might" Only the first chapter is up now, due to my very nitpicky editing process. If you see any spelling errors, be free to list those out as well.

Clown the Jester -> RE: Comments on Thunder's Might (5/19/2011 22:09:22)
Nice opening...reminds me of greek myths I read. Your like a super hurcules I like it.

zanathos -> RE: Comments on Thunder's Might (5/20/2011 7:26:46)
Thanks Clown, that means a lot coming from you.

Gray Silhouette -> RE: Comments on Thunder's Might (5/20/2011 15:19:03)
I found it very interesting. Don't worry about taking your time....it is better to come out with a perfect chapter after a long period of time than to rush through it. Every nice. I know some have said you are basing it off Thor, but I do not agree....it is unique and very enjoyable. Keep up the good work.

zanathos -> RE: Comments on Thunder's Might (5/20/2011 20:24:45)
Thanks Gray, At first i was reluctant to do a story off of Thundersmite, because a lot of people see "otherworldy hero who can control storms" and they immediately say it's copying Thor.

Jae10 -> RE: Comments on Thunder's Might (5/20/2011 23:59:57)
Very nice, Zanathos. The story is going great so far! You have excellent writing abilities, better than you think I believe :3

delta blitz -> RE: Comments on Thunder's Might (5/23/2011 16:41:43)
interesting and very creative you created your own mythology alongside an existing one.

zanathos -> RE: Comments on Thunder's Might (5/28/2011 9:49:44)
Chapter 3 is now Up!

zanathos -> RE: Comments on Thunder's Might (7/30/2011 18:52:18)
Chapter 4 Is finally Up!

Arachnid -> RE: Comments on Thunder's Might (7/30/2011 19:14:12)
Very nice story... I'd like to read more! ^^ If you want any help at all, you know who to call! =D ~Lady Zafara

Drakkoniss -> RE: Comments on Thunder's Might (7/30/2011 19:49:14)
I have deemed this thread worthy of finally of my posting on it. FEEL THE POWER OF MY COMMENTARY, AND VIEW IT IN AWE!!!!!!!!!! lol Interesting... You skipped over the gauntlet? Makes me wonder if you'll show parts of it in flashbacks... Interesting... basic knowledge of them only... I suppose that being a warrior, you wouldn't need that much knowledge of magic, though... I do believe your aquaintance Mendax is evil, young one... probably justly imprisoned, anyway, although there's a chance he wasn't, but it was important enough to supercede justice... I suppose not quite emerald, being malachite, but the color is similar enough that I'll let that slide. XP Hmm... Mendax reminds me of Loki... although I suppose there are differences... Interesting... destruction of one's soul... I suppose the begging was a result of the helm taking effect, and him not having been a complete coward all along, yes? AH!!! I KNEW HE SOUNDED LIKE HIM!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!! You said they were not actually immortal, but truly just very long lived, yes? Makes me wonder if Ultima is supposed to be the true identity of Thor, in that case... albeit he used a sword... perhapse Mjolnir was broken at some point, but then again, this is still complete conjecture... Then again, seeing as he had never heard of earth... unless he is only familiar with it as Midgard... Then again, it's a mix of many mythologies, so he hay be a basis for more than just Thor...

delta blitz -> RE: Comments on Thunder's Might (7/30/2011 19:52:52)
@thundersmite: Woot welcome to the writer's club,sry if I'm late to the party x3. Mythology is always a fun resource for writing stories and making up characters.

megakyle777 -> RE: Comments on Thunder's Might (9/16/2011 2:03:55)
Looking good so far.[;)]

vulkan -> RE: Comments on Thunder's Might (7/31/2012 14:36:19)
new chapter looks good. Im wondering whats next.

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