(HS) Brother and Sister: One Evil, One Good!: Ch.1 Beginnings! Commentary Thread

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DarkLore -> (HS) Brother and Sister: One Evil, One Good!: Ch.1 Beginnings! Commentary Thread (5/29/2011 11:51:55)
(HS) Brother and Sister: One Evil, One Good! I just made my first AE Fanfiction.

Shadow Ravena -> RE: (HS) Brother and Sister: One Evil, One Good!: Ch.1 Beginnings! Commentary Thread (5/29/2011 15:54:45)
It would help if you linked your story to this thread so people don't have to hunt for it in the archives. Short, but a good start. Felt a bit rushed, there are places where more detail could be added to make the story smoother.

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