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TheGuardian_2007 -> Old Hands - Discussion/Comments (7/13/2011 0:44:40)
Old Hands (short story) So, this is my first post in Legends & Lore. I'm a fairly new fiction writer, so any comments and criticism would be very welcome. I felt like my characterization was pretty weak (what little there actually was), and the structure felt a bit weak... I don't know. Was my writing style acceptable? Was the plot understandable? Any issues you find, please, bring them up.

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