(HS)Elements of Smash

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UnityDestroyer -> (HS)Elements of Smash (7/16/2011 22:30:10)
Discuss my story named "Elements of Smash" Discuss!

mikeyc0312 -> RE: (HS)Elements of Smash (7/19/2011 16:00:36)
I read through your story and I think it is really good. Very well thought out with a decent plot line. However the grammar was, unfortunately, really rather poor. That is my one criticism, and I believe that if you can sort that out, it makes for an excellent story.

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