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Drakkoniss -> RE: (HS) Legacy ~discussion~ (12/11/2011 19:58:54)

Celestin, Kardinal is a ranking member of S.C.I.F....

Yes, it's probably both, but I am guessing that voice actually came from somewhere, and someone who is actually alive, most likely.

Hearing the Peace Guild reminds me that Velmur is the leader of the Peace Guild. XD

Makes me wonder what Rae's planning, too. XD

I am likewise eager to peruse her future work, my good man. Hehe...



Antithesis -> RE: (HS) Legacy ~discussion~ (12/11/2011 21:07:38)

Hate to admit this, but your stories are the only ones I've truly read through here on the forums.
The way you write is amazing, and you really gripped me in, especially with visualization...

I very much so look forward to reading more of your stuff. I enjoy your writing much more than I have the others'.
Not to say anybody else is bad, it's just that you seem to think about (and tell) the stories with a much higher, more mature level of thinking.

Cheers,
Anti



Devastate -> RE: (HS) Legacy ~discussion~ (12/18/2011 0:21:03)

I am done with the first panel and I thought I should stress out these points :

-The 3rd person point of view is executed very well, making the reader grasp the information you were giving on a 3rd person based level.
-The introduction was written well, and has captured my attention; very inviting indeed.
-I love how the situation was portrayed, from Jack to the three divers; there's this sense of tingling sensation when the projector(3 screens) went out.
-I also love how Albert acts like the "goofy" ingredient for the group, making the story less serious but not to the point that the depth and content was altered.

I should comment next after reading the second panel.

Ti's worth reading!



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