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Mind Mage -> (AQW)Yemisar Ghask the Mercanary~Comments (8/19/2011 14:15:18)

I have yet to finish the story, but you can comment on the work so far. More parts to come.

link to part one... PART ONE

Where should Yemisar and Thom go after they meet up with the airship????



Mritha -> RE: (AQW)Yemisar Ghask the Mercanary~Comments (8/24/2011 15:12:48)

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With his men behind him, he rushes into the battlefeild shortly after the airship arrives.

Should be battlefield

I noticed a few more spelling/grammar errors but won't point them out unless you want me too :) Interesting story so far, I'm assuming the airship is like the ones found in Skyguard?



Mind Mage -> RE: (AQW)Yemisar Ghask the Mercanary~Comments (8/26/2011 11:56:45)

yes. the airships are like the ones from skyguard.



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