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Eukara Vox -> =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (9/22/2011 10:38:21)

In the Beginning...
A place just for AQ peeps to talk about their character beginning stories!



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (9/22/2011 10:43:18)

@Eukara Vox: What exactly is this thread about, AQ or AE?

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Need to explain to the world who, what, where, why and how your ED character came to be?



Eukara Vox -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (9/22/2011 10:46:21)

Still creating and using templates from other threads. Excuse any errors.



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (9/22/2011 10:56:27)

@Eukara Vox: No need to apologize, I was merely confused.



Cataclysm -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (9/22/2011 18:30:44)

I've actually got a thread currently up for Cataclysm's origins. Would it be acceptable to post in the story thread with just a link to the Cataclysm: Origins thread in this instead of posting my entire story so far?



battlemaster25 -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (9/22/2011 19:54:06)

Might I ask for feedback on my story? I'm willing to accept criticism. (Please go easy with it, though, I'm a complete amateur.)



Eukara Vox -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (9/22/2011 20:47:47)

@TCO

That is just fine if that is what you want to do. You can either link it or repost that section in the thread. Either way, go for it!



dethhollow -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (9/25/2011 12:31:03)

@battlemaster25
I liked it.
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It's body was shaped like that of an Alpha Lycan, but it's eyes glowed red

I thought Alpha werewolves already had red eyes.

and just, surviveing wolfwings attacks as a werewolf? that's really diffacult...

but great job!


anyone want to discuss my story, or want me to discuss thiers?



Kinzdor -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (9/26/2011 9:31:35)

@dethhollow

I found you story very enjoyable. I loved the Teenage Mutant Turtles reference.

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I want a couple dogs, a time-free watch, some dinosaur eggs, some dinosaurs, a llama in a sock hat, 3 pounds of bacon, and a book on 'how to Dougie'


I could barley make it through that sentence before bursting out laughing. There is one thing though you stated your character as being a fool. Seemed more to me like he just playing mind games instead being a fool. What do you think of my story?



battlemaster25 -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (9/26/2011 15:25:05)

@dethhollow

Thanks for the reply. Also, you're right about the Alphas' eyes, I think I should pay more attention....

Also, the battle with WolfWing wasn't surviving the attacks, it was more dodging them. As soon as he took a single hit, he went down. (What? I'm pretty sure I'm allowed to exaggerate my character's abilities a bit.)



dethhollow -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (9/26/2011 16:23:10)

@kinzvlle

pretty good. I can see that (maybe by coincidence) you took some insperation from Harry Potter, but that's just my opinion...
like how he could be considered a local villan, since everyone is afraid of him.

I'd imagine the wand was a zardwarts study wand, that makes the HP refference almost absolute.
But I liked it.



@ battlemaster 25
maybe the werewolf had 200 DEX and LUC and was holding the Sackelberry special shield... then maybe he could normally dodge wolfwing?
ehhh... sounds like as good an explamation as any.



battlemaster25 -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (9/26/2011 20:08:45)

^Well, it was sorta based on my real character. My stats aren't right currently, but I'm slowly re-configuring my character to be of an accurate build, but sacrificing most or all of my endurance, hence the "dodges well, but can't take a hit".



dethhollow -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (9/28/2011 7:12:57)

nice.



Sir Arceon -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (4/11/2012 12:51:00)

How come nobody's commenting on MY stories?



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (4/11/2012 16:08:32)

@Drakonnax: You're not in the AQ-storydatabase, so either you forgot to post the story or your story is not about AQ.



poodlemiester -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (9/23/2012 22:55:05)

Idk if people are even monitoring the threads anymore, but if so, tell me how I did, i am just starting and crave feedback.



Darquess -> RE: =AQ= In The Beginning... Discussions (3/10/2013 18:42:29)

I think it went well.
Not sure if I should give the origin story of Dyson Yasden yet...
hmm, going to have to think on that.

EDIT: Four Chapters in and Dyson is getting more complicated.
I could write a book on this guy. As it is, he has had four stories and an origin story.



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