(HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION

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Kinzdor -> (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (11/22/2011 1:21:12)
The story can be found here Let me know what you think. Be honest!

Sir Night -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (11/22/2011 1:43:43)
Well you have a cool character here, that's for sure. My only complaint about this would be that right now it's really more of a character description than an actual story. But it's definitely a good premise for a story so keep it up.

Goldstein -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (11/22/2011 17:04:27)
This would make for a great voice-over for a Saturday morning cartoon.

Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (11/23/2011 18:42:06)
Added chapter 1!

Drakkoniss -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (11/24/2011 18:18:21)
A strange, yet intriguing story you have there; Also, I agree with Strebor, it WOULD make an interesting Saturday morning cartoon!

Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (11/27/2011 12:27:12)
Ya I have fond that I have a pretty unique write`ing style! aslo chapter 2

Goldstein -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (11/27/2011 22:27:01)
You really, really like exclamation points, don't you?

Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (11/28/2011 0:40:10)
New chapter!

Goldstein -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/2/2011 0:25:17)
OmniCorp eh? Only Bugs Bunny can express my feelings.

Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/4/2011 18:06:50)
Remember these 2 Omnicorps in mine and your story are alike in ways but not the same! Also chapter 5 is out! It is a bit short!

Jae10 -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/16/2011 18:51:11)
Fantastic job developing your own story Kinz! I always wondered how you ended up on The Dealer's leas- uh, side. XD Very nice origin too. I wonder if you were also somehow exposed to any of Pandora's malachite during your earthly exploits? quote: He then handed Darkness a Hal Droid,a cell phone with the Onmicorp logo on it,and a book about Earth. blinks twice He just handed those over? For $FREE.99?!?!? Oh, maybe it was included in the contract you signed, lol. Keep it up! I'm sure Mr. Dealer has plenty of evil work for you to do.^^

Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/16/2011 19:56:21)
NEW CHAPTER UP. The chapter was so big I had to split it into 2 different chapters.

Goldstein -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/17/2011 22:43:25)
I thought I was going to be the doctor, not Blackshock...

Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/17/2011 22:55:00)
You healed on the side walk. Also I wan`t sure if you treated villeins. I know for a fact Blackschock does.

Sir Night -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/17/2011 23:49:34)
quote: "You idiot you aren`t supposed to attack those alined with chaos!" That's what they all say. I'm not sure why. Chaos people taste good too... Anyway, enjoying the story. I laughed when you got hit by the truck. And I wonder who that shape shifter was?

Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/17/2011 23:56:25)
The one that transformed into a baseball bat? That was Stephen Fear. As for the one that changed forms that was PrimalVodo. It is more along the lines of multiple personality's then it is shape shifting.

primalvoldo -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/18/2011 1:17:10)
Nice introduction for my character kinzvlle, you got his personality very well done. Just remember the few spelling errors like "tellaport=teleport" and "Allie=Ally" but don't worry too mutch about it. While the HeroSpire war is going on I'm still able to contact you and control the BioHazards. The next chapter you should figure out his name. They call him Voldo. Only you and I know what will happen to Herospire in the next few chapters, it will be a laugh....

star screamer -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/18/2011 23:57:28)
Why would Stephan do such a thing! He is good! And ouch don't bite my arm Crocy.

Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/19/2011 17:13:39)
The bio you sent me said he was chaos and killed the living!

star screamer -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/19/2011 18:21:18)
Star Screamer is. Not me.

Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/19/2011 20:30:42)
Well the name on the bio said Stephen Fear!

Sir Night -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/19/2011 20:36:49)
If it's a big deal you could just change the name in the story to Star Screamer.

Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/19/2011 20:55:08)
There I have changed the name!

Goldstein -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/21/2011 2:36:08)
Doctor Goldenstein does not discriminate! If you're hurt, you're hurt. I'll help. (And my bed-side manner is a lot better than Doc Blackshock's, but don't tell him I said that.)

Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DARKNESS KING-DISCUSSION (12/26/2011 19:19:14)
Goldstein I see you more of a battle medic. Ready to rush into combat, and heal those on the front lines. I can see you in a military hospital but not some city hospital.

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