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Kinzdor -> (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 19:33:23)

The story is here
Discuss The Death Games.



Drakkoniss -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 20:14:33)

The link isn't working.



Goldstein -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 20:34:56)

I like my introduction. Make sure you listen to the accompanying song!



Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 21:17:05)

Fixed the link. Nice intro Goldstein,though was not excepting you to introduce a new character.



Goldstein -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 21:25:31)

What? I did WHAT?



Vector -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 21:42:51)

i think what he means by broken link is that it's not clickable.
oh, and maybe he tried to change strebor up a bit too, if i'm not mistaken[>:]



Goldstein -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 21:55:30)

No, Segreto Donalle is a new character I'm using for stories independent from Strebor's.



Vector -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 22:07:56)

that i didn't know. care to tell his alignment in case he ends up interacting with my competitor later?



Goldstein -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 22:15:04)

He works with the Illuminati, so naturally...

He's very polite, but stiff, and totally devoted to the task at hand. Likes to avoid conversations. Doesn't like the fact that the Illuminati gets such a bad rap.



Vector -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 22:30:50)

then you better keep him away from my competitor as much as possible, unless he wants to risk... shall we say, utter failure. [>:]
is my assumption that the illuminati being unspeakably evil correct?



Goldstein -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 22:36:45)

You've never heard of the Illuminati? Google them!



Vector -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 22:39:45)

i've heard of them and i just want to be absolutely sure we're on the same page here. different opinions, and all... >.>
but don't expect me to change mine[>:]



Goldstein -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 22:42:05)

The Bavarian Illuminati started out as a group of scientist fighting for reason. I'd like to think the modern Illuminati is like that, not the perverted form the conspiracy theorists have made it today.



Vector -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 23:03:09)

i'm afraid that doesn't exactly answer my question. do we think the same thing, or are our opinions opposing each other?



Goldstein -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 23:09:26)

I support the Illuminati. I don't think they're evil. Does that answer your question, or am I blind or something?



Vector -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 23:13:46)

crystal clear now, goldstein. my warning remains, however



Goldstein -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 23:15:11)

D=



Vector -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/11/2012 23:21:42)

it's only because everyone seems to hate him, nothing personal. i don't want to risk an incident outside the competition... or during, for that matter



megakyle777 -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/12/2012 4:17:42)

Hi there, just wanted to give some critisism on the stories of the Ommicorp Death Games from what I has seen so far. I will make it short.

Kinz, the prolouge is good, but I think it needs to be run through a spell checker for puntuation and spelling purposes. The tale it tells is good though and quite interesting. My only complaint is that the reveal of Clown to the audience may be a little too early, but I will wait and see what others think on that. It also may be a little short, but since it's a prolouge that's fine and it serves it's purpose.

Also, link is broken here.

Goldstien, I liked your tale and it adds some intrigue to the games already. Good job. I wonder how far this imposter will go...



Vector -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/12/2012 15:28:56)

alrighty i posted my intro to this, so... i half expect to change a few things, but for now i'll just leave it as it is so you can read what i have so far



Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/12/2012 16:27:13)

OK I fixed the prologue.



star screamer -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/12/2012 16:46:01)

I should be posting the part where you hire me soon
It was through letter. :)



Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/12/2012 20:39:28)

Nice Star,hmm the riddle sheet intriguing.



star screamer -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/12/2012 21:20:39)

The riddle sheet thing was just a little joke, it really has nothing but riddles on it.

~Look out for colours, Trivial



Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) THE DEATH GAMES! (1/12/2012 21:33:08)

Well I was rather to author,that`s why I called you Star.



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