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Jae10 -> Discussion of "Stream of Conscious" (2/16/2012 10:41:06) A poem I wrote in my spare time which anyone can freely talk about. I may extend on it later. Hope ya likes! :3 Click to read Stream of Conscious

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Clown the Jester -> RE: Discussion of "Stream of Conscious" (5/1/2012 15:10:56) How very mysterious I like it. Heh heh....it speaks to me. WEll done as always M'dear.

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Aurauris -> RE: Discussion of "Stream of Conscious" (10/2/2012 13:04:32) Would it be overly Harry-Potter-fan-esque of me to say that your first two stanzas reminded me of a Pensieve? > u< I love the sense of growing strength in the speaker's ruminations, first in being lifted up, then taught to soar and claim the sky as her own. Admittedly, I am a bit curious as to the sudden shift in likening these thoughts to the sea, and then the skies. Regardless, you etch a most soothing picture within my mind. A delectable, freshly-baked hunny muffin for your brilliant work, Jae!

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