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Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/28/2012 0:01:38)

The only thing I find odd is just how many of these gods there are. I mean gods are generally VERY rare, but here 1000 of them is few. Compare to their being only eight Elemental Lords.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/28/2012 0:03:13)

Actually there was 300 by the time of extinction

Also, the Celestial Gods governed space



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/28/2012 0:05:57)

Tomorrow I will start chapter 2+crusher's background



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/28/2012 0:06:30)

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A few thousand exist, as the ratio of humans to Celestial Slayers is 50,000 to 1. The extinction of the Celestial Gods was the presumable reason shadow beings from nearby galaxies went to Lore. Rumor has it that they inhabited weapons to hide from Celestial Slayers.

It never really mentions that, 1000 was the only thing really given...



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/28/2012 0:07:38)

Yea, a few thousand celestial slayers, read on and it makes sense



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/28/2012 0:09:30)

No I meant it never gives any indication of how many there are now. I took it as meaning there were a thousand left.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/28/2012 0:10:52)

Oh, sorry about that. Thought I wad clear. Anything interest you?



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/28/2012 0:12:27)

At second glance I'm not sure, I probably just completely misunderstood.

And interest hmmm, well not yet so much. Characters haven't really had time to develop yet so it wouldn't be fair to judge them now.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/28/2012 0:12:54)

Ok

Turning in now



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/28/2012 20:25:46)

Have updated the Celestial Slayer post + the addition of the Dromian Crusher



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/28/2012 21:01:51)

Hm, well that explains that then.

Though...a Dracolich? That's a bit random. Is there a particular reason why?



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/28/2012 21:05:45)

Crushers are part demon. The demons that make up Crushers are dracolich spirits most of the time.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/28/2012 21:26:43)

New chapter started, will explain the Genesis Dragon Amulet and the 3 Sacred Dragon Amulets



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/29/2012 17:36:43)

Chapter 2 finished, working on the new information post.


Prepare for unknown history



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/29/2012 17:45:19)

Hm, so mostly dialogue which isn't bad. I guess now we know the main point of the story anyhow. I can't say I really like the idea behind the special amulets, but that is a personal quirk and thus not a valid point.

Anyhow, shouldn't Lazarus be fully grown now? I assume Crow knew him 1000 years ago and it only takes 100 for a Dragon to grow to full size.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/29/2012 18:10:37)

Celestial Dragons are larger than normal Lorian dragons. About 3x the size to be exact. He has to become compact size for most of the time, unless him and Crow run into titan sized trouble



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/29/2012 18:13:17)

Methinks you'll need another explanation post explaining them.

Since apparently they can change size.

But wait, Titan sized, so that would mean that they....aren't 3x bigger?

And if they are, are they basically a smaller version of WarpForce Star Dragons or something?



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/29/2012 18:14:49)

Yea, gonna make another info post for your sake xD



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/29/2012 20:17:38)

The info post on the 3 amulets is complete, now for the Celestial Dragon post



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/29/2012 21:02:52)

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The Omega Amulet was crafted by a group of evil Dracomancers hell-bent on controlling all of dragonkind,

Isn't that a bit contradictory?



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/29/2012 21:05:11)

Hence, they were "evil"

.-.



Glais -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/29/2012 21:06:50)

No not that, how can you be a DracoMANCER if all you seek to do is enslave them?



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (2/29/2012 21:10:31)

Not explained here, I have a book of these ideas. One day at a time...

"The evil Dracomancers concieved an idea that they could become Psuedo-Dragons, half human half dragon beings with immense magical power believed to have the power to spout mountains and kill enemies just by touching them."

Quoted from my book



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (3/1/2012 18:37:13)

Chapter 3 is technically over just need to add a few se.tences

EDIT: its complete

Next up, celestial dragon info post. Then chapter four.


Hope you guys are ready to see the full power of a Celestial Slayer and the Alpha Amulet



VanHellsin24 -> RE: (DF) The Grimm Tales of Van Hellsin Commentary (3/2/2012 18:42:52)

Gonna continue but for my edification since only 1 person reads this >.>



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