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Goldstein -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/24/2012 19:36:33)

Kinz, I think she's with the Order. And the power level of these knights are OVER 9000!



Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/24/2012 21:10:58)

The knights are extra powerful! I imagine defeating them would take mass amounts of teamwork and complex planing.



Sir Night -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/24/2012 21:20:21)

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I highly advise you all decided together his level- Clown set it really, so you all should follow that or talk to him


Yeah, Clown should probably spell out exactly what these knights can and can't do so nobody messes up what he has in mind.



Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/24/2012 21:42:38)

In that case I shall wait to my post my next chap, until Clown explain the knight power levels!



Antithesis -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/24/2012 22:32:42)

VEGETA, WHAT DOES THE SCOUTER SAY ABOUT HIS POWER LEVELS?




IT'S OOOOVVVVVEEEERRR-



Velmur -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/24/2012 23:02:58)

I'm in, will post tomorrow!



Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/24/2012 23:19:32)

I have been thinking about it and the power level could vary for each knight. I mean sure they all have the flaming sword and impenetrable armor, but they are different people! Different people have different strength levels, and fighting styles.



Antithesis -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/24/2012 23:45:55)

But their entire theme is Order. There should be no variety.

For that reason I feel it would be more suiting if they all fought and thought the same way. Like clones, almost.
Unless there are ranks in which higher ranks are more powerful than their lessers..?

Still, each soldier shouldn't have independent features.



Kinzdor -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 0:03:52)

Well lets just wait for Clown, to get on so he can decide! They were his idea!



Zeuzt -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 1:26:01)

@ Anti

if you read through my posts in the story it basically just means that I was fast and could not get captured
also I didn't fight the other knights that would be stupid I mean I can't destroy one why fight 4 of them
also edited some of it for clear reading yes and would like to see knight's limits.

also I know it says brotherhood but there can be girl knights right I mean you know figurative brotherhood.
cause if not I need to change my next chap.

thanks



megakyle777 -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 4:40:59)

I have written a new Chapter. I'm not so sure on it so opnions are needed.



Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 5:08:59)

Anti: Not really true. Calling it an Order implies ranks and differences in power, although they would all (minus possible spies) be working to the same goal. I assume that they saw Clown as a high threat, and sent out weaker scouts to deal with the others.


But what do I know, I'm not a writer.



Antithesis -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 5:19:02)

It is a Brotherhood. They represent and fight for Order, but it is not the "Order of Order." It's not an Order at all.

Therefore they should be orderly and represent their theme, which would mean they would all be similar if not the exact same.



Zeuzt -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 5:25:22)

Okay megakyle I read your chapter and you
I would hate the dealer
also can anyone answer my questions

EDIT: I would think that any joined alliance or cause needs positions
just how they have a leader they need lesser knights and stuff just an opinion



megakyle777 -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 5:26:32)

Okay, first off, even symbol swearing is not allowed. Second, what's wrong with it?

And i don't see an ything wrong with female Knights, except possibly that there were no female knights in old times.



Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 5:29:36)

Anti: That was just my idea, and do I need to refer you to the "people who are not writers" list?
Zuest: I would assume not, given the Knightly theme.



Zeuzt -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 5:31:27)

how do you do spoilers then?
and those are not bad words changing it
nice chapter kinda uhmm how do I say this?

EDIT: I'll wait if clown allows females in the brotherhood kinda feeling no already so prepare chapter change......



megakyle777 -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 5:35:11)

Just post the word spoiler in these brakets instead of what's there now [insertthewordspoilerhere] This is where the spoiler goes.[/insertthewordspoilerhere]



Shadowlord9k -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 5:55:53)

Commentary:

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Get it? Knight's and medieval times? Jester's are also usually associated 
with medieval times.

It's not funny when you have to explain the joke. 

quote:

I WOULD RATHER BE BEATEN BY A LITTLE GIRL THAN 
BOUND BY YOUR WHIM!"

I'll go get susie.
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quote:

"We offering you space tokens.

Gotta get all the SPAAAAAAAAAAA-

quote:

Range was by no means prepared to fight an army of these men.

Then prepare a planet. Possibly uranus.
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Thankfully these chapters are pretty short, makes them easier to read at....3am.

I regret nothing. On to the next part. Well part 6 I mean.
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quote:

He didn't smell the ringmaster's scent..
He was sure of what he was feeling...

3am brain makes everything sound weird.

quote:

That means there will be times that they can go berserk without them knowing when.

Let's give him a chainsaw then. It can't possibly backfire.
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I'll read more in the morning.



Immortales -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 7:33:40)

posted mine yeah it's longer than the first post yay huzzah



megakyle777 -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 8:02:05)

Immortales: Just out of interest, what if your opnion on latest chapter? Also, just like to point out that lengh is not equal of quality. Not saying yours is bad, just saying that you can write good small sections.[;)] Mine are rubbish, but that's not indicative.



Immortales -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 8:12:10)

Actually I think small and long quality will be the same in my writing I suppose just that they're not good though.
Also I spent more time on that last one because I wrote it on word first then copy paste here

@dealer asking opinions

Your chapter was more epic than mine yes also how you continue it is one of my worries
well good chapter; well written
I wonder how glaisaurus would react to the epic feat your character did
hahaha wanna see[:D]
good story and typos are unavoidable I have them I think
good chapter
/wondering how'll you'll continue it[8|]
all I can say



megakyle777 -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 8:13:53)

Oh, he will be back. He will ALWAYS be back. But for the rest of this tale he's out of the fight.



Immortales -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 8:17:42)

Yes that is a major setback in the dealers part



PallyKnight -> RE: (HS) The Brotherhood of Order Discussion (3/25/2012 9:34:56)

How much I wish I could write a good enough chapter to contribute...I have ideas just no way to get them out...



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