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DeathGuard -> Lifeless Verses (Discussion Thread) (4/5/2012 16:06:32)

Here you can discuss the verses and poem in my thread Lifeless Verses. Any suggestion or critic will be welcome. If you want to use some of my verse or a poem, make sure to give me credit of it by putting
quote:

~G.R.
Which are my name's initials. Thanks for reading.




Fay Beeee -> RE: Lifeless Verses (Discussion Thread) (4/5/2012 16:18:40)

Oh death your peoms make me feel so sad.
Have a little of my light to help you survive.
Make sure you use it well, or I will get mad.
Then I will smile because you are still alive.


Just off the top of my head.




DeathGuard -> RE: Lifeless Verses (Discussion Thread) (4/5/2012 16:29:42)

Nice poem reply, I know I could be happier, and I will try too. I'm just seeking that happiness I've waited for so long, but your light will help me find it. Don't you get mad, because I will get sad.




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