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Hiraku Tatlin -> (DF) By Hand and Claw (4/21/2012 19:58:49)

By Hand and Claw



Passageway to a light-hearted Tale

Hello fellow Forumites! My name's Hiraku Tatlin, and I felt so inspired by the exciting tales from other members in this forum that I worked off my courage to write this fun if not random tale.

While this story focuses on a seemingly random character, as you read about him, it will actually focus on a character you meet at the very first quest of Dragonfable! This story departs from other stories I have posted with a more light-hearted and funny feel to it, but I intend to continue those other stories too when I get the chance.

As always, I enjoy hearing from my readers. Any comments on the storyline is appreciated (there exciting to read as well :)) as well as any constructive criticism that can help me to improve on the story overall too.




Glais -> RE: (DF) By Hand and Claw (4/22/2012 0:34:00)

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This..being had flesh and pretty colors all over her,

Found this amusing for some reason.

And...wow. You seem to be able to write in many various styles. I pretty much enjoy anything you kick out so keep it up!




Hiraku Tatlin -> RE: (DF) By Hand and Claw (4/25/2012 21:26:23)

Just finished the second chapter. On a side note, don't expect anyone, including your game character in DF to just 'waltz' into a dragon's home and expect a warm reply by its residents. If your lucky, they might warm you up on a harsh winter day, but sometimes put too much heat into it.




drinde -> RE: (DF) By Hand and Claw (4/26/2012 2:58:48)

Um.... Is it Kali or Tali?

She stated she was Kali but you put Tali in:

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...actually caught the attention of Tali and her dragon associate...




Hiraku Tatlin -> RE: (DF) By Hand and Claw (4/26/2012 8:30:03)

Haha. Looks like you caught my little typo. Her name's actually Kali. I'll fix my entry a little so that her name is adjusted properly. Thanks for pointing that out.




Hiraku Tatlin -> RE: (DF) By Hand and Claw (5/14/2012 20:36:42)

Chapter 3 has been added to continue Kali and La'val's confrontation with his mother. See the unusual ways that the pair deals with the situation before them. >_>




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