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Mortarion -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (5/27/2012 0:28:53)
ok, glad I could help you

Glais -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (5/27/2012 0:47:41)
First off Birdemic reference="win" as they say. Wait so does this mean LizardMan is a villain? Like a permanent one? Hmmmm... quote: I had just barely landed maybe some fifty centimeters I had misread that as "Fitty" xD Which would've been hilarious to me. Anyhow... spoiler: I was just thinking about TotalH4X ShieldMan...why not have him exist as a theoretical character? One that they might discuss, but isn't actually real. Just so he exists SOMEWHERE. Just say he's so powerful he's subconsciously blocking attempts to summon him. HE BLOCKS HIMSELF FROM BEING REAL BECAUSE HE IS TOO OP

Razen -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (5/27/2012 1:02:29)
Yes, that would've been amazing. As for Total H4X ShieldMan, he will be discussed in Chapter 2, near the end, he will be very existent and be ShieldMan even. Those upgrades will do that to ya. Then again, near the end, SwordMan knows how to [REDACTED]. Accomplishment: This story already has more hits than the other Non-AE Fanfictions I wrote. :D

Glais -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (5/27/2012 1:07:31)
Oh he's real? Fun stuff. How does one find their story's hits anyway?

Mortarion -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (5/27/2012 1:11:10)
Hmm, you could have Voodooman as an enemy of Wizardman

Razen -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (5/27/2012 1:18:45)
To find story hits, you have to search for your posts in a so and so section and it will say how many hits the thread has. Basically, Search in so&so section, go to Search, type in your username in By Author, and Wazam just add water! Do note, Water not included And, WizardMan? There's MagicMan, but no WizardMan. But, there might be a VoodooMan, so long as I get approval/no one confuses him with Voodoo Master. :P Also, another tiny update. Added a reference to a specific song in a good ol' cartoon in one of LizardMan's thoughts. And added a bit towards where I left off. @Below: Err, what makes no sense at all? You just look for posts from yourself in a section. Or whoever you're looking for.

Glais -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (5/27/2012 1:22:49)
That makes no sense at all. And yes, NO WIZARDMAN, ND Mallet made sure of that...

Razen -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (5/27/2012 15:44:19)
Another small update. Getting really close to finishing Chapter 1. I'm so excited. [:D] Make sure to keep refreshing, as I will be posting updates as I go too. :P Edit: Added a paragraph before LeaderMan and ShieldMan were teleported to the Vineyards.

Onyx Darkmatter -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (5/27/2012 19:59:26)
spoiler: I wonder how did Negativeman knew Leaderman's plans...

1412. -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (5/28/2012 1:31:20)
Awesome story. After the prologue I was engrossed in it, and the comedy in here had me laughing throughout. You got yourself one heck of a story here, its really amazing. I can't wait for the next post. Darn cliffhangers. But--How did NegativeMan know about LeaderMan's plans? Does he have SpyMan on his side? On a side note..If there's a talentman for everything. I want to see FireMan, a man that specializes in Fire would be cool. [;)]

Razen -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (5/28/2012 1:34:52)
Well, as one person explained it incredibly well, "Because the worst thing that could happen was LeaderMan's plan not being secret anymore." Since NegativeMan's powers are quite literally, making the WORST possible thing that could happen(No matter how implausible) happen, unless it directly interferes with someone's power. Also, there could totally be a TalentMan for Fire!

1412. -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (5/28/2012 2:08:38)
Oh, NegativeMan's powers really make him one of the most powerful villains ._. But what about PositiveMan? Or is LeaderMan taking his place. There's hope? Yay! I may just see fiery chaos in here yet. [8D]

Razen -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (5/28/2012 2:22:44)
NegativeMan needed to be sufficient H4X to best a team that can be lead to anything gloriously and has a means to "H4XToWork" Defense and Offense. Especially since they'll soon have a means to summon ANYTHING in short. As to where PositiveMan is? I don't know. Maybe BanisherMan banished him or something. Anyways, I did add a bit to the LizardMan/NegativeMan Dialogue that explained how NegativeMan learned of the plans legitimately. It also will break the fourth wall.

DeathGuard -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (5/29/2012 0:11:04)
Specifically, the theme revolved about gathering a strong team to beat NegativeMan, though some of the emotional circunstances should let us speculate a betrayal. I'm of those that like to see a story with variety and love should take place though not going in a different direction. I liked a lot the use of apostrophes, and sophisticated words( I got a dictionary near my hand so that I can understand it better). I will comment further but I need to rest, wait for an edit in the morning and make sure to read it. Great story and originality.

Razen -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (6/1/2012 7:48:52)
Update! Did the fight scene with LizardMan, sorta. Although, if anyone could give some actual advice as for how to actual WRITE them fighting, I would highly appreciate it. So far, I've been more or less writing StallFest 2012. Made a necessary reference to DIO BRANDO, anyways. And it worked with relevance to the plot, that's what I love with how I incorporate my references in.

Razen -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (6/2/2012 14:48:00)
Update!!! Chapter 1 is completed, outside of whatever errors need fixed, and possibly a rewrite LizardMan vs. LeaderMan's team.

Mortarion -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (6/2/2012 18:48:10)
Well that was a good chapter

Glais -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (6/5/2012 6:04:13)
Fiiiiinally got around to finishing it, wow that ending was longer than expected. LizardMan is growing to be my favorite very quickly. And I'm glad SummonerMan has...actual downsides to his powers. Although him+LeaderMan could be deadly as LeaderMan could just "lead" the things he summons.

Mortarion -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (7/20/2012 11:32:51)
Sooooooooooo when will you update?

Razen -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (7/20/2012 11:37:21)
I don't really know. I'll try to do it whenever. Besides, with the new DF L&L...it'll be some time.

Mortarion -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (7/20/2012 11:41:00)
ok :(

Razen -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (9/14/2012 4:34:54)
Oh boy the hiatuses. Posting this to state that updates on Chapter 2 have started! So, what say we go "Back to the Past, ~~Samurai Jack~~ LeaderMan"? Anyways, so if you couldn't guess from above, they're going back to the Past already, a chapter before I had planned, but it's all good.

Glais -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (9/14/2012 6:37:44)
quote: it was nigh impossible to find a flaw or fault in him or his Rats. I'm dying. xD Anyhow, off to a good start. Interested in where this will go and what other bizarre parodies will appear.

Razen -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (11/8/2012 22:10:55)
Small Update: All abroad the Love Train! Or, well, let's get ready to get the Love Train a-going.

Mortarion -> RE: The Universe That Shouldn't Work Comments (11/8/2012 22:26:33)
IIRC you said you'd add a character Razen

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