(COMMENTARY) The Rise and Fall of the Kingdom of Zealot (Full Version)

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VanHellsin24 -> (COMMENTARY) The Rise and Fall of the Kingdom of Zealot (5/26/2012 0:15:16) Here it is. Don't hold back. Destroy my soul if needed Changed the title so people wont get confused between book and commentary updates

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Mortarion -> RE: The Rise and Fall.of the Kingdom of Zealot Discussion (5/26/2012 0:46:27) Hmm I like it, seems good

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VanHellsin24 -> RE: The Rise and Fall.of the Kingdom of Zealot Discussion (5/26/2012 11:11:26) Chapter One is complete. Had to take stuff out for the kid-friendliness of the forums. Chapters will be very very VERY long so don't expect non-stop updates.

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dogsrule100 -> RE: (COMMENTARY) The Rise and Fall of the Kingdom of Zealot (5/28/2012 12:21:00) Its good so far! I liked the 1 chapter. I'm working on my chapter 1 right now. anyway...I kinda wish we could get more gory and more obvious with the bedroom...I think that it makes it harder to write and develop the characters been so well 10- age appropriate. So any way it is good so far...you should desribe the witch more...I mean is she pretty, ugly, or what?

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VanHellsin24 -> RE: (COMMENTARY) The Rise and Fall of the Kingdom of Zealot (5/28/2012 13:39:15) She appears very attractive but is actually a hag

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VanHellsin24 -> RE: (COMMENTARY) The Rise and Fall of the Kingdom of Zealot (6/12/2012 17:43:20) Chapter Two is complete

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