Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: Dragon's Files feedback! (6/20/2012 16:06:47)
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Hello BlueKatz. Let's see what we have here, shall we? *Cracks knuckles.* quote:
And on one of his birthday he got a dragon egg. Year later he and I traveled to Dragonsgrasp. birthdays, One year quote:
A prefect prince I would say, but then he decided to join the Dragon Lords which, in my opinion, <> not the most exciting job. is/was quote:
But Reginald really wanted to help other people, and as a former prince I guessed he find that suitable. found it fitting, sounds like what you're going for here. quote:
Most dragon grew mentally fast, but it could take thousands years to be fully grown. Most dragons grew fast mentally quote:
I was strong, but I just fail terribly at fighting mentally as the trainer said. failed quote:
But the Dragon Lords wouldn't use <> Dragon Amulet that often, it exhausted both Dragon Lord and the Dragon greatly and mess with the Dragon mentally - it was unnatural to grow that quick. their, messed, quickly quote:
The worst part about Dragonsgrasp was the training, we trained a lot and even though we were fast learner, we still felt like learned <> nothing, the experience was the thing. learners, we had learned quote:
But we spend most of the time in the library lately. We technically were well trained enough, but still considered as trainees, and they had the worst ranking system ever: questing. There were war out there at the moment, and we could only "guard" this fortress. Reginald was furious and he spent too much time digging all the files to get the quests done. spent, wars quote:
Anthea took all the paper and quickly read them all, then looked at his eyes "Rex, why still you chase after this?" into, why do you still chase after this quote:
"That's why I send you this report from Amityvale, where people start missing lately around Old Village Hill and they reported up to Dragonsgrasp as thing got complicated there<>" brought (if he did it now)/sent (if he did it in the past), things, lately./recently. quote:
If we just sit there, it would take at least 2 more years until we get to higher rank. Because everyone was busy, we got a chance to get this mission - a ridiculous mission, but he won't give in. sat (t)here, got to a, had the chance of getting this mission, wouldn't quote:
You can give me the permission, or we do this old fashion way." the old-fashioned/old fashioned quote:
she was the only one here to do the paper work and who <> want to waste that much time? would quote:
But investing the town only! But investigating the town only! quote:
I, of course, did nothing, and Reginald only took some money, an amour, a dagger and a sword. did not need anything, armour quote:
We used <> Gryphon to get down there because we didn't want to get exhausted getting down there in full Dragon form before the quest begin. a/the, began quote:
The road was solid as rock and almost every trees were dead or maybe. tree was dead or looked that way quote:
and any other just got vanished. quote:
He often made comments on the surrounding and sometime joke on my silliness. surroundings/surrounding <noun>/woods quote:
Ah yes, I and my father here are taking care of the pumpkin. pumpkins quote:
Thing are getting weird up there, you should be very cautious... Things quote:
some adventurers and Guardians investing that place. investigating quote:
Few minutes later, Amityvale was under our eyes sight. within eye-sight I do apologize that the other chapters will have to wait. The story itself shows great promise. It has got a mystery feel to it. Of a detective and his dog dragon solving a case.
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