penultimate page. my intentions were to post a double page, but i'm not quite happy with the last page. expect final page and something a little whimsical next week ^-^
I was thinking the exact same thing, Arcadia. The exact same thing...
Final page then whimsy?! I do protest, sir! From what I see, 'tis only the beginning!! Any thoughts on a chapter 2, or am I going to have to draw my own dots from now on?
-EDiT- Dude!! I've only just noticed the grass! Details like that are so awesome!
i'm glad arcadia's reading like that, it's just what i hoped for. also glad ya like the background in the first panel. took me a while to make one that worked with the rest of the pic. i do have a general idea on where the plot goes next, but before that i want to take a break from this arc and try and see if i can work either a very short story, or more single page silly ones. each character will get an epilogue page (except maybe arcadia since he just wont leave me alone), and when i get feedback from those that'll effect who i focus on when i return to this story.