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Evil Torn -> (DF) A New World Discussion (7/16/2012 18:37:25)

Story located here.

All commentary/critique/discussion is welcome, even if bad.

~E.T.



Glais -> RE: (DF) A New World Discussion (7/16/2012 21:02:33)

Read the prologue. I'm not a fan of involving Earth in DF at all, but even with that bias you've handled it very well.

ElFok being Batman is hard to take serious though xD



Evil Torn -> RE: (DF) A New World Discussion (7/20/2012 20:28:57)

Added some more chapters.

~E.T.



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: (DF) A New World Discussion (7/21/2012 5:44:15)

EDIT: Your grammar looks good, but I'm having issues with the current powerlevels of our Terran protagonist.

Please clarify if I'm mistaken, but he seems to have complete control over magic of others to the degree of an Archmage.



Evil Torn -> RE: (DF) A New World Discussion (7/21/2012 13:27:06)

The shield that he generated was only a basic-level spell, any beginner learning magic should be able to know it. Kind of like Mage's defense skill. The ability to push it back was also very easy, considering ElFok Vezar had only fired a beginner fireball. He doesn't have complete control of magic, but it's in his blood that he learns magic quickly and is able to perform it with ease. Being transported into DragonFable...changed him, to say the least.

That also explains how he is able to block almost all of ElFok Vezar's attacks. He's not lolh4x, nor is he nowhere close to being lolh4x. He is, however, above average.

I'll probably get around to explaining that in greater detail in one of the chapters. I can't really do it right now, because, well, they're kind of busy with war and don't have time to sit and talk.

~E.T.



Glais -> RE: (DF) A New World Discussion (7/21/2012 15:16:47)

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He said that he had always had it for decorative purposes in my house

Eh?

Anyways, interesting how you're trying to change the future.



Evil Torn -> RE: (DF) A New World Discussion (7/21/2012 15:19:05)

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Eh?


YOU SAW NOTHING.

But yeah, I'm sort of trying to change the future. I plan on giving...well, you'll read it. Eventually.

~E.T.



Evil Torn -> RE: (DF) A New World Discussion (8/16/2012 20:35:29)

Took hiatus. Don't expect too many updates. Will come at random. School's keeping me busy and stuff.

New chapter.

~E.T.



Glais -> RE: (DF) A New World Discussion (8/16/2012 20:58:31)

Good chapter.

Xan's dialogue felt a little forced though.



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