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VanHellsin24 -> Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/19/2012 10:42:46)

Part II of an epic Saga

Well, you guys are experienced enough what to do here:

Read, comment and critique if you feel like it.




Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/19/2012 11:07:18)

quote:

lefendary set of their lost forefathers.

legendary


Interesting name.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/19/2012 11:14:31)

Thanks about the name. This is Part II to the Chronicles of Alaric Mycroft. It would've went on longer but this war ties in at a certain point* so I decided to create this new saga. It will focus on Alaric and his cousin of greater power Azrael and everything the intro post mentioned



Arthur -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/19/2012 11:32:04)

@Van, I don't think you got what Dwelling said about the name.

Anyways, you my friend, are obsessed with Crusniks. Been having an overdose of Trinity Blood of late? :-/

Interesting start to be sure.



And again, Interesting name...



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/19/2012 11:33:38)

What name is interesting?

Finished Trinity Blood thrice last week :3



Arthur -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/19/2012 11:36:11)

Lol. Definitely an overdose.

Anyways, scroll down to the bottom of the AE Fanfiction Discussion list and check out the title of Dwelling Dragonlord's epic, and its premise.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/19/2012 11:37:24)

OMG LOL

Coincidence bro, sorry. If you want me to change it I can



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/19/2012 13:24:17)

Oh look, is that a new chapter up?



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/21/2012 1:03:53)

If no one got the joke it means Chapter One is up.

And now, Chapter Two. This one's gonna be legit.



Glais -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/21/2012 5:58:56)

Apologies for not getting to this sooner, hadn't been in much of a reading mood.

Anyhow, your writing's vastly improved. My only real complaint is those names.

This Aura power could be quite fun, looking forward to how you develop and use it.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/21/2012 13:09:44)

What's wrong with the names?



Glais -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/21/2012 15:39:57)

You seem to be following the X-Color+Y Object scheme of clan names. But that's not bad, actually the only one that seemed too beyond belief was Goddenomega...it's...God...and Omega. And yet it's a name...



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/21/2012 19:12:46)

Not quite comprehending but whatever. The Goddenomega live up to their name. Trust me on that.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/21/2012 21:46:57)

Chapter Three is up.

Before I'm hounded

spoiler:

Safiria and Azrael have NOT started an intimate relationship. Azrael is just very friendly



Glais -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/22/2012 2:10:55)

Aaaand caught up. Thise Wraiths or Crusniks seem like they'll be pretty OP, wonder how the cast will deal with them.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/22/2012 21:33:59)

The cast can't really do much but let these two ( and a few more ) OP subraces do what they want to do.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/23/2012 1:42:16)

Chapter Four is up.

spoiler:

Ok they're kinda in love.



Glais -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/23/2012 18:26:21)

That was odd. Was gonna complain about little plot advancement, but the last line hints something big is going down next chapter.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/23/2012 20:04:49)

Not next chapter. The following chapter after this next one will. This new chapter upcoming will delve into the strongest non-evil clan.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/30/2012 12:22:44)

Chapters Five and Six are live.

spoiler:

The slaughter of entire Inquisition fortresses, family feuds and tribulations altogeter. Oh my.



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/30/2012 16:53:02)

Chapter Seven is live!

I'm on a creative role!



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/30/2012 20:18:43)

I believe...I can...put out at least three more...by tomorrow



Glais -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/30/2012 20:21:07)

That's a...lot of productivity. Only read Chapter 5 at the moment (last night) and you wrote so much since then...

Was gonna comment on how impossible it seemed for one guy>10,000 but then I remembered that's pretty much every mission in Fall of Cybertron :P



VanHellsin24 -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/30/2012 20:25:06)

Meh, I only did PvP in Fall of Cybertron. Story mode...meh


EDIT: What do you mean by "1 man >10,000"?



Glais -> RE: Commentary - [AQ/DF] The Blood Legacy (8/30/2012 20:34:11)

The last line in Chapter 5.




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