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Mister Stone -> Shaded Mirror Commentary (9/23/2012 15:00:19)

Here's the story folks!

It's probably not going to be the most accurate story involving AQ, but I'm going to incorporating a lot of AQ settings here and there, like Granemor and what not later on

Tell me what you think so far!

Moved to proper location since it does not qualify as AQ-fanfiction. ~DD



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: [AQ] Shaded Mirror Commentary (9/23/2012 16:14:00)

Does this story still play on Lore?

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It looked more of a personal party than ceremonial, except the alter with the two Sphinx in the center where the Centaur was supposed to have me perform the ritual.

except for the altar with the two Sphinxes

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a Summoner, instead of using spells to the battlefield, summoned creatures to overwhelm their enemy in power and leadership.

Either Summoners or his/her.

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You are to take the Blade of the Alter and cut through the palm of your hand, so that I may engrave the symbol on your palm for eternity.

off the Altar

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I unsheathed the blade from the pocket of the alter and observed the design briefly;

altar

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Massive shuffling and chaos amerced; could it be that we were under attack? An intruder in the palace? Uncle Makkad appeared before my side, and two Knights appeared soon after before us and the Centaur.

commenced, at

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Their royal majesty’s have been murdered.

Is this like kingly plural? Otherwise, majesties.



Mister Stone -> RE: [AQ] Shaded Mirror Commentary (9/23/2012 16:34:02)

Wow, didn't realize I made that many mistakes o.o Thanks for the criticism!

I would like for the setting to be on Lore, but my ignorance of the story of it prevents me from connecting most of the events that happened on Lore to the actual story. That, and I'm planning to make up a bunch of stuff. Does that still make it apart of the AQ Storyline Thread or do I have to take it elsewhere?



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: [AQ] Shaded Mirror Commentary (9/23/2012 17:01:55)

@Mister Stone: Do you think you can write as if this story plays on Lore? If the answer is no, stop reading and type it down so I may move this thread to the Creative Works Discussion where can write a story with all the artistic freedom you desire.

If your answer is yes and you can convince me by the next chapter that this story plays on Lore like you claim it does, then I'll let the story remain here.



Mister Stone -> RE: [AQ] Shaded Mirror Commentary (9/23/2012 17:31:12)

Hmm...challenge accepted =p. I'm going to work on the next 2 parts early to see where I stand now =o



Mister Stone -> RE: [AQ] Shaded Mirror Commentary (9/23/2012 20:06:12)

lol that's the last time I try to rush a story D=. Only part 3 is up for now. Chapter 1 will be finished with part 4 though

spoiler:

there isn't going to be any Lore related moments in it, as it will be a summary of what Hyze did during Laam massacre


I'm not going to be writing anymore today, my fingers are tured [:@]. Tell me what you think so far everyone!

EDIT: Finished chapter 1! And even though it was the longest, part 4 was my favorite one to write =D



Mister Stone -> RE: [AQ] Shaded Mirror Commentary (10/3/2012 21:12:22)

Chapter two has begun! And part two'll be up tomorrow, since I'm like halfway done with it.

But I have an announcement: There won't be any more additions to the story any time soon, since the whole thing's really kinda taking up more of my schedule than I thought it would. I figured I could have just bum rushed through the story pretty fast, but at this point I'm not even halfway done with it =p. So I'll stop working on it for a couple weeks, and then work on on my own time on Word or something and have the whole thing up in one foul swoop by like...next year or something [:o].

But feel free to help me out with anything; if my story's missing something, if it has too much of something, why you hate it, why you like it, anything'd be good =p.


Oh, that's it? Hmm, 'kay then. Bai bai now [;)]



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