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VanHellsin24 -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/3/2012 22:33:10)

VanHo MortAurus...

Best title IMO. It could mean something special in a made-up language



lordkaho -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/3/2012 22:35:23)

Well...It does sound convenient. But the ring of the words just sound too abstract to fit as a title, imo.

Mortarion and maybe, Glais, what say you?




VanHellsin24 -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/3/2012 22:37:11)

Vanho Mortaurus
The Season of Evolution


Rolls right off the tongue, no?



Mortarion -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/3/2012 22:39:19)

I agree with Van here, it rolls off nicely off the younger, it tastes good, yes I used the word taste, as there is no other way to describe it



lordkaho -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/3/2012 22:43:10)

Hm...I like it. Matter of fact, it does sound pretty cool.

Though, what about-

Vanho Mortaurus
Boundary of Existence

Since boundaries are the main focus of our plot? Think about it. Our characters are separated by boundaries, boundaries in the form of differing moral alignments, conflicting goals and ideals, and are literally separated by land and sea. Our main antagonist is obsessed with boundaries.






Mortarion -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/3/2012 22:44:52)

It's also cool, so, how about we use your title Kaho for this one, and then we write a sequel with Van's title XD



VanHellsin24 -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/3/2012 22:46:05)

Vanho Mortaurus
Wars for Supremacy

Part I ~ Boundary of Existence



Mortarion -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/3/2012 22:46:49)

^@: Even better



lordkaho -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/3/2012 22:47:01)

We haven't even started with the complete prologue lol.

Stop thinking of sequels this early..It reminds me of all the failed prequels I made in the past :(




Mortarion -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/3/2012 22:48:34)

Sorry, couldn't resist, but is was pretty cool



VanHellsin24 -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/3/2012 22:48:49)

Ok.

We go with LK idea then, since my last was unsettling



lordkaho -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/3/2012 22:51:27)

Okay so it's settled then. Since this project is special, I'll promise at least 1 visual art for each chapter.


I will be making 1 for this prologue before we release it. Which part do you want to be drawn?

P.S.

Don't worry Glais, and Mortarion. I'll have your character images done real soon.




Mortarion -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/3/2012 22:53:13)

Hmm, I'd like to see the antagonist entering the main Pagoda, with the dead bodies as the background, with the master praying,mid it's not too complicated, and, YAY, and don't worry Kaho, we can wait.

By the way, just give my char a human head



VanHellsin24 -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/3/2012 22:54:50)

What mort said.

If I'm lucky ill have the prologue ready tomorrow



Glais -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/4/2012 1:38:25)

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And the way he describes the New World is that it seems they have already achieved industrial revolution compared to the Brittanian Empire.

Well this was also due to me not knowing at the time it was 18th Cen. Earth. But I'll keep the tech the same due to the vision I have. Think Legend of Korra age mixed with that game Limbo I mentioned earlier.
quote:

I kinda have a technological advantage. The thing is, during this time period not a soul would believe me.

*Waves*



lordkaho -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/4/2012 2:09:16)

Glais, you have been pretty quiet about the Prologue. How was it? Anything you need changed?




Glais -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/4/2012 2:21:53)

Actually I just didn't have access to it for a bit, I'm in the middle of reading it right now.



lordkaho -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/4/2012 2:25:04)

Oh, well have fun.

We'll probably release our Prologue later today.




Glais -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/4/2012 2:41:36)

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“Worry not. Their deaths have not been in vain. I shall see to it that their demise shall have a purpose.”

Hahaha, sounds very Enrico-esque, which I'm loving.
Also Prana as the deity, might that be a Nasuverse reference as well?
quote:

The man attempts a step forward, however, suddenly everything is enveloped by a sheet of gray, sapping all of its color except Tashokan.

You can guess what I was thinking here.
quote:

the man’s arm had burst through his right chest,

The coincidences are indeed growing bizarre.
quote:

“Your eyes. You shall no longer be needing them.”

I feel bad for being reminded of Naruto here, given Eye-Transplants' prevalence in the series.

Unrelated, in contrast to the brass look of the SteamPunk countries, in the RD prevalent West Silver is more common in color. Just though I might mention it.



lordkaho -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/4/2012 2:50:23)

@Glaisaurus

Prana=Gautama Buddha. In the Nasuverse and in Buddhism however, Prana is the equivalent of Chakra, the inner life force of the soul.

quote:

I feel bad for being reminded of Naruto here, given Eye-Transplants' prevalence in the series.



Though, that was more of a jab to Araya Souren, the man Anulwaaz was inspired by, who says to Ryougi Shiki 'Your face is not needed' as he tried to steal the Mystic Eyes of Death Perception.

Don't worry I won't be 'plagiarizing' from Naruto of all things.

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Unrelated, in contrast to the brass look of the SteamPunk countries, in the RD prevalent West Silver is more common in color. Just though I might mention it.


Nice. It would give the much needed added distinction between countries.




Glais -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/4/2012 2:53:01)

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Don't worry I won't be 'plagiarizing' from Naruto of all things.

I know, it just came to mind since that's literally the plot of Naruto now. :/

And well, they are a fair amount above everyone else Technologically, but it's balanced (hopefully) by a complete ignorance to magic. Arguably the only people who'd know about it are the ones in control of Rainy Days, since they effectively control the "country."



lordkaho -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/4/2012 2:59:55)

If you want, since it's probably the Americans who made it popular in the 50s...the people from the country, where the RD is at a monopoly of technology, believe in the existence of Aliens?

Think about it. Though, of course don't bother thinking it too much if it only adds more unnecessary plot threads.


Oh...So, well after reading this chapter, what do you think of our Main Antagonist? Is he fitting enough?



Glais -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/4/2012 3:02:54)

Yes, I like him quite a bit. Though I suppose it's to be expected since he reminds me a lot of one of my favorite JoJo characters, even though it's unintentional.

For once I don't think Aliens would really fit, doesn't seem like the type of story for them really.



Mortarion -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/4/2012 16:54:57)

You know, the concept of the sect of monks, reminds me the Air Nation/Acolytes from Avatar



Glais -> RE: [COLLAB] Project VanHo MortAurus *Under Construction* (10/4/2012 16:57:57)

Hm, yeah slightly. Although his moves were far more lethal than I'd expect from a Monk.
I mean...he made that guy explode. And he can go Za Warudo on everyone.



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