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ND Mallet -> (ED) Writings of a Moose (10/23/2012 23:26:30)

Story discussion in here. Story found over there.



Glais -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (10/24/2012 3:46:43)

Feels a bit...I don't know, sort of just dropping info on us. But that'll probably change soon. Will be following this.



ND Mallet -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (10/26/2012 0:36:55)

I removed the Intro and just went with the Prologue. I think it's much better now compared to how it started.



Glais -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (10/28/2012 5:52:57)

Yep, biiiig improvement. Sets up nicely for someone like me who doesn't play ED.

One question though...why Dunbar?



ND Mallet -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (10/29/2012 22:34:37)

I couldn't think of a better name and the replacement name I was given got lost in my mind. >.>



veneeria -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (11/2/2012 22:29:01)

So far, so good! :D I don't usually come here or there, around here but the first chapter was really moose-some! :D
I like how you managed to keep Alydriah in her character also. :D
So when shall you use your moose tears to heal wounds ?



ND Mallet -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (11/20/2012 14:51:56)

Not exactly moose tears as you can see. :P



ND Mallet -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (1/6/2013 11:37:06)

Sorry for the double post but I have another chapter up of my story.



Asuka -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (2/18/2013 0:18:48)

quote:

"I will take my chances, these people need me though. I wish I could sit back and lay low, but I cannot watch as people are hurt and need healed to health. I will risk everything to ensure that they get what they need," I stated grimly.


For some reason this really bothers me. you could try saying "And need healing back to full or Proper health." The rest of the story is really good owo

Even taking out "Need" after "Need healed" or "Need healing"



rayniedays56 -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (2/18/2013 4:01:16)

Amazingly symbolic of Delta V's lifestyle, I may say.

I have a few points I want to get off my chest though.

What exactly is a Grichtheon? What do they look like? What power do you use to manipulate the minds, as you did when you cured Invicticus *hehe, bad moose, BAD moose*?


Andthe biggest question I want to know is...


When are N.D. Maleta and AmberDawne Rayne going to meet up in romance?


AND WHERE ARE ALL THE MOOSE??!??!?!?!?!



ND Mallet -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (2/18/2013 11:04:30)

Well, a Grichtheon is a savage at best, as covered in the story. They really aren't all that different that they stand out really. They're a little bit taller than most and some say a slight shade of green that's barely noticeable. And they don't control minds, I don't come out and say it in the story but I leave clues that their powers involve the entire body of themselves and others. I'd say Neum is about average in his talents. He can manipulate the body pretty well but not as much as a master Grictheon. To give an example, they could rearrange their entire being almost instantaneously and into different forms. So they could avoid a knife to the throat by basically turning themselves into a large snake and slithering out of that situation. It is a very good thing they are mainly solitary or they'd have banded together and formed an unstoppable army. Neum is one of those weird exceptions and doesn't really like his past. He left not only because he had to but because he wanted to.

And I have enough people looking for references in my story already. :P Moose will be coming shortly.



Glais -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (2/18/2013 17:53:20)

So after a while, picked this up again
quote:

"A medic? You mean you want to help out those low lives who are hardly fit to live?" she stated matter of fact.

...interesting society.
quote:

was protected and even supported by the women and her paper.

Woman



ND Mallet -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (2/19/2013 21:26:10)

It's just Alydriah. She's cruel and heartless. Not everyone is like that, and usually not to that extent.



rayniedays56 -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (2/20/2013 22:18:52)

quote:

When are N.D. Maleta and AmberDawne Rayne going to meet up in romance?



I WANNA KNOW THIS!


ARE we not in love anymore?! I gave up HUMAN LIFE FOR Life...with a...MOOOSEEEEE!!!! O_O



/rant over


I was thinking. Wouldn't it be awesome if Maleta had an Epic Duel? :D



ND Mallet -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (2/20/2013 23:00:25)

I do have an Epic scene prepared already. Maybe even two. Not really a duel since those don't last long when his instincts kick in. And I already said no more references to people I know. :P



hijinks -> RE: (ED) Writings of a Moose (3/4/2013 16:23:15)

I love this story ND, very interesting and I like how you made the main character very dynamic (imo).



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