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The Demon Mage -> (ED) The Screams of Pain! ~Commentary.~ (12/24/2012 8:23:24)
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Alright! Prologue's up. It's a bit short, just six hundred words or so, the following chapters will be most likely 4-6 pages long or so, since I don't feel like writing too much and I've noticed that not too many people over here at these forums write really long stories (as in 10-15 pages per chapter). In fact, I haven't noticed a single one so far. :/
Anyway, feel free to discuss! I know that the prolouge is quite repititive and quite un-interesting. I'll try to spice it up as the story goes along. As you may have noticed, the main character will be lusting for revenge so expect betrayals and action, and perhaps, if it is allowed, one or two suggestive themes.
Here's the link, hope you enjoy and don't forget to comment/review! http://forums2.battleon.com/f/tm.asp?m=20966127&mpage=1&key=?
Let me know of any mistakes and plotholes that I have made please.
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