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humzaawan123 -> [critique requested] birth of artix (1/17/2013 15:51:44)
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short story on the birth of artix....would love some feedback !
dawn broke on the first day of the summer Solis , the wind sung the song of reckoning forming an orchestra with the old brisk trees , today was it . The day when the alleged prophecy would come true , the savior of lore and slayer of the ever growing undead will be born. the queen lay carrying the infamous child in her stomach awaiting for the days of her suffering to be over so that peace and good can govern over the land as it was before the war began , her eyes flung open , the birds started to chirp as the light shone on her guarding the beautiful baby about to be born into this world. He is here artix the paladin has finally come . The prophecies were true, there lay lores savior gazing at the rays of light surrounding him baffled by the wonders of this world a twinkle of hope appears on his right eye , good will prevail
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