UnderSoul -> RE: =OS= Beta Release Thread LXXIII - READ THE FIRST POST (1/22/2013 23:01:31)
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It's rather good, though you may want to refine a few things. It's alignment seems like Neutral/Evil, and the element is Fire and Shadow. Does she have seperate lines for controlled and fought? That might be a good idea, though aside from that the idea is solid. I think you should have an Appearance section, as that is definitely an important aspect. Also, the centering makes it rather hard to read the story.
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