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aliesterus -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/11/2013 22:01:47)

So then, no comments about my suggestion?

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My current (one and only) entry.

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My OS Contest 2 entry (I was prepared this time XD)

Name: Skexis Void Dragon
Artwork: http://twitpic.com/cw43ty
Primary Element: Shadow
Secondary Element: Lightning


Yes, I know some of you can recognize it, but I figured it might have a better chance as a contest suggestion than as a suggestion for the master of Skexis Fiend.
However I still hope it could be Skexis Fiend's master, but if not, I'm hoping it'll win this contest at all XD




odsey -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/11/2013 22:19:53)

Guys is the contest is only for character suggestion or stroy of Oversoul too?




aliesterus -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/11/2013 22:20:30)

@Odsey: I think kinda both...




odsey -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/11/2013 22:30:53)

@Below Aw.. Too bad. I guess there is always another time for story contest.




aliesterus -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/11/2013 22:33:05)

@odsey: Oh, I misread your post. Yeah, character suggestions only, sorry.




Cyber doom5 -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/12/2013 20:08:29)

http://cyberdoom5.deviantart.com/art/My-Entries-to-the-Oversoul-Contest-2-377536014

That is a link to all of my current entries i would really appreciate it if you guys could tell me what you think of them oh and if you click each ones individual link you can read the characters backstory

like what is your favorite

and what i could improve on

also i noticed that its really hard to tell what could win this contest

since its not an art contest the best art wont be chosen unless its also the best concept.

ANYWAYS Id Appreciate some input guys




Lord Noonien Soong -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/13/2013 11:53:42)

OS 2 Char backstory: Zivilyn Soth, once loyal knight of the Knights of Solace, in which, he left to be his own hero, to do good by himself with no code and measure that he had to follow, now he is saving lore from the clutches of evil!




Mondez -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/13/2013 12:21:30)

Another entry upload and sent to Nulgath through twitter and I made his design very thorough and descriptive so meet my Oversoul entry that is War himself: Gerad the Eternal General




MasterofSorcery -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/13/2013 12:24:52)

Hey Guys I placed my character suggestion in the Contest and wanted some feedback on the backstory for her and in case you don't know what Lehava means its "Fire" in Hebrew thought something unique and special would be good to use as a name also here a link to my character suggestion Character Suggestion Info my character suggestion is also on page 6 of the contest thread




Mondez -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/13/2013 12:44:37)

@TrizZZ
You just officially won my vote in the drawing section. I knew you did art for ED, but in the name of Nulgath can you do some serious sick art. [:D]

*Boom* Another writing entry down and I plan to throw out all of my "Beginning of the Void" characters from my book: Shadow the Inner Darkness




TRizZzCENTRINO -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/13/2013 12:52:53)

@mondez thanks! and yeah i am an epicduel artist but can't resist when there are art contests that tests my skills




Puppet Master -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/14/2013 2:29:29)

Any thoughts or comments on my suggestion?

http://twitpic.com/cx22nw

My friend made this not me. All credit to her IGN Aryll13




MindsEye -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/14/2013 4:58:19)

Hey guys, check my entry out.
https://twitter.com/MigoDavid/status/344764487829712896
http://twitpic.com/cwy4oc




megakyle777 -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/14/2013 5:07:00)

So, some of you may recall that I wrote 8 characters colletivly called The League Of Remearkable Gentlemen, with Lord Beck doing the Ice one. Well, I have entered them with a tale and would like to hear your thoughts.

http://forums2.battleon.com/f/fb.asp?m=21311680




BattleLord -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/14/2013 6:34:44)

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Name: God Hand or Mephala.. or Mephala The God Hand
Rank: Legendary
Element: Shadow

Appearance: Appears to have a blue - symbiotic type armor over his body. The armor does not cover his eyes, mouth or nostrils because he does indeed need to breath. He should be about as tall as any other human lifeform in the game. And last but not least he should have wings also covered in the symbiotic armor.
Here is a picture of the character this idea inspired from:
http://th06.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/018/1/8/femto_by_zdaysurvivor-d37i65n.jpg
Here is my takes on the art: https://pbs.twimg.com/media/BMrl4pmCEAEWAW2.jpg:large

Quotes
Player: Envy the beginning of a new darkness... the darkness of light
Enemy: I Am the God Hand, even Nulgath fears my fury

Backstory:
Arc 1: The Beginning
One time long, long ago... a man named Aros had embarked on a quest to become the hero of his nation, and soon learning he would have to become the hero of the world itself. He quickly began to rise in ranks upon the military he had joined, but scorned being lead by another. So he quit the military and set off to become the leader of his own mercenary group that he would have full command over. Over years and years he fought countless battles with them, slaying the beasts that Nulgath commanded to scourge the lands of Suinotlim and destroying the armies that he and his mercenaries were contracted to destroy. He had faster than anyone created the greatest army in the history of Lore itself.

Arc 2: Fatality
Years had past and the glory of the mercenary group lead by Aros became even greater than anything, no military's name would ever become as great as this one. But a tragic day was yet to come where Lord Aros had to finally step into Tercessuinotlim to battle against the menace known as Nulgath, he and his men fought bravely all the way until the end but by the time Aros had reached Nulgath's domain in Tercessuinotlim, it was to late for the rest of his men, they had already been lost to the fiends and the makai that dwelled there. It was just Aros who was left to fight against Nulgath... and that he did. They fought for hours, bringing Aros to the point where he had no energy left... while Nulgath was a being of near unlimited fighting energy. Aros knew he would only have one last chance to make a strike so he ran in for the strike... but little did he know Nulgath had been toying with him the whole time, not needing to fight him hand in hand at all. As the last strike headed towards Nulgath's heart the Overfiend Blade jumped in front of the strike blocking it, while the Oblivion Blade flew straight through the back of Aros' heart. Life was over for Aros, or so he thought.

Arc 3: Second Chance
When Aros awoke he was in a completely white zone, it felt much different than anything... more real than reality ever felt to him. He was greeted with a voice, "Aros, I have chosen you," Aros felt astonished not knowing what was going on at all. He looked around but failed to see anything besides a bright light, so bright he could not stare directly into it. "Who are you," Aros asked to the light and it replied to him, "that answer is not needed, but you are to serve me on Suinotlim, you are not to be here yet....," he stated to Aros and before Aros could say another word a blue liquid like base started covering his body and soon sprouted wings out of his back. The liquid like base soon turned solid, more solid than anything he had ever felt before and the light spoke once again, "you now have my armor, and the gift of not needing foolish human needs and folly's," Aros gasped, "you are also no longer Aros, you will be named Mephala... the God Hand... and you will do as your name states, you will be my enforcing hand on Suinotlim." And before the new named Mephala could even respond to what the light had told him everything went black, and he closed and opened his eyes, just to once again see his home of Suinotlim. At first he thought it could have been a dream, but he looked at his hands and noticed the armor was still there... he now knew he was to destroy Nulgath for a final time... and he had been gifted with the ability to do it. So, he rose to the sky and also unsheathed his blade holding it triumphantly.

Quest: Bring me back any five of Nulgaths henchmen to be interrogated to give me his new location and I will gift you dearly
Quest Completion: Good job, now we are one step closer to finally destroying that blasted Fiend.... oh, yeah.... here's that reward I had promised you (open shop)

Shop:
  • Mephala The God Hand(Boss) - 12 Sg's
  • Mephala - 6 Sg's
  • Aros - 200 000 Gold <----- Recruit as a child who becomes older up until the form of Master, after master he will become Mephala

    Cards
    500 Attack Cards - x3
    200 Attack Cards - x2
    500 Defend Cards - x2
    Blood Rage - x2
    Sacrifice - x2
    Life Drain - x3
    Void Of Mephala - Summons a void entity in the shape of his own and it attacks for him, 5 hit combo. Cost: 13 Energy, Damage: 1500

    Boss Stats
    You can decide on the boss stats :)



  • Anyone have any feedback on my character creation I'm looking for both bad and good, constructive criticism is always great imo




    Antithesis -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/14/2013 6:51:21)

    My most recent suggestion, just because I felt like getting another one out there;

    quote:

    Name: Saturn
    In-battle name: Watcher
    Alignment: Neutral -10
    Element: ...Energy?
    Legendary rank!

    Quotes/Lines

    Controlled: "Curses upon you, heathen. I deny your weak pretender gods."
    Enemy: "The Watchers laugh at your weakness. Die, worm!"
    Victory: “Atlas be praised."


    Animations:

    Shield: Crystals rise from the earth.
    Charge: Energy emits from the palm of his hand and makes a small explosion.
    1-hit: Slashes with a spike on his arm.
    2-hit: Slashes once downward, and then stabs.
    3-hit: Punches once into a grab, and two lightning bolts rise upward from the ground into the target.
    5-hit: A massive crystal rises from the ground and charges the player, who then channels energy from the target.


    Original art by me; made this picture quite a while back, but it's still mine so I'm usin' it for this!

    Saturn; The Self-Proclaimed God of Change





    The deck has a focus on energy DoTs, as well as (possibly) a 5-hit-combo attack.




    Obviously this suggestion has a focus on art rather than story. Cheers




    Goma -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/14/2013 7:10:35)

    many of these suggestions are great.. correction all are great! all you have done an amazing job it's been interesting to read about so far i look forward to read more

    i did these just for fun and since the contest is up and nearly finished i'll just post it here in a safe case i hope you like the stories since i am terrible at art




    Lupus the Wolf -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/14/2013 10:28:00)

    My entries
    Anyone care to give some comments




    Raiii -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/14/2013 10:52:45)

    ^ Entropy has got to be one of the most unique designs I've seen so far

    ~Puncture




    KaiserLos -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/14/2013 11:08:23)

    Name: The Beast, Lucifer
    In-battle: Lucifer
    Element: Fire
    Rank: Legendary

    Quotes:

    Controlled: !dniefhcra tearg eht ot sgnoleb luos ruoY
    Enemy: !eriflleh ni nrub luos ruoy yaM

    Appearance: http://sigmundvankaiser.deviantart.com/art/The-Reaper-Beast-Lucifer-321499150

    His original name was Lucifer de Sanctis. He was widely known as a very wealthy, but equally greedy businessman. Aside from his greed, he was also known for many other misdeeds such as murder and forgery. But because of his vast wealth, he can easily bribe anyone and the fact that he did such things would be erased from the face of the earth for all of eternity. He thought he'd live the rest of his life as a rich, greedy and happy man. But alas, karma was a very cruel. Lucifer would always choke down large amounts of food and drink alcohol daily. One day, his body couldn't take anymore-- resulting in a heart attack. His soul forever wandered the earth as a ghost, never to find happiness nor salvation. But then, the great and powerful Archfiend Nulgath appeared before him. "Look at you. Pathetic. But you know what? I'm feeling nice today. Join me, and you will rise again... for a price, of course." Lucifer readily agreed, but then he'd regret this decision for the years to come. His body was resurrected, but then he slowly turned into a horrifying beast. He may have risen, but he will forever feel the pain and suffering to those whom he committed sins to for the rest of his life. His appearance masks the pain he feels inside. "You are now my Scythefiend. Go, and collect souls for me."

    Animations:
    Charge- He raises his body, spreads his wings and arms and roars.
    Shield: A pillar of fire rises from the ground
    1 hit: Slashes at the enemy with his left hand
    2 hit- Slashes at the enemy with his left, then his right hand
    3 hit: Slashes at the enemy with his left, then right hand, and finishes off by lunging forward and biting the opponent
    5 hit: A massive ball of fire forms in front of his gaping mouth, then shoots it at the enemy



    Name: Fuuma, the Blind Sword Sage
    In-battle: Fuuma
    Element: Ice
    Rank: Master

    Quotes:

    Controlled: "You dare challenge me? Hah. You amuse me."
    Enemy: "I guess I can play around for a bit."

    Appearance: http://sigmundvankaiser.deviantart.com/art/Blind-Blade-Master-321498329?q=gallery%3Asigmundvankaiser%2F34606248&qo=5

    Fuuma has beaten every opponent in his home country. He was a very well known swordsman who is famous for using 3 swords at once. He has also mastered in using chakra to his liking, able to control multiple swords without even holding it. He became bored of the warriors in his country, so he ventured into the cold and harsh mountains, extending the limit of his body and power. After 6 years of training in the snow, he incorporated the power of frost into his attacks. His skin color shifted to a light gray. He cut out his own eyes on purpose, to test his skills in using his sense of touch, hearing and smell. He believes that a warrior must always be silent when he takes a life. So he loosely sewed his mouth shut. Later on, he ventured into a different world. The world of OverSoul. To further test his might, he accepts challenges from different types of enemies, from Paladins to undead warriors.

    Animations:
    Charge- He raises his sword, then both its blade and his tattoo glows
    Defend- A gust of wind surrounds him
    1 hit- He lunges forward and stabs the enemy with his katana
    2 hit- He lunges forward and stabs the enemy with his katana, then slashes downward
    3 hit- He lunges forward and stabs the enemy with his katana, slashes downward, then stabs the enemy again
    5 hit- He dashes forward (almost like teleportation) then performs a series of quick slashes



    Name: Dranix Darkshadowe
    In-game: Dranix
    Element: Darkness
    Rank: Master

    Quotes:

    Controlled: "Resistance is futile!"
    enemy: "I'm gonna cut ya down real good!"

    Appearance: http://sigmundvankaiser.deviantart.com/art/Dranix-Darkshadowe-321500877?q=gallery%3Asigmundvankaiser%2F34606248&qo=2

    Dranix was born from the very spiritual essence of the Grim Reaper. After reaching maturity. he crafted his own scythe which he called "The Harvest Sword." But he felt that he wasn't strong enough. He thirsted for more power. So he broke the laws of the universe by destroying his creator: Death, otherwise known as the Grim Reaper himself. He took the Reaper's skull and attached it to his scythe. And with the end of the Grim Reaper, he now reins in the underworld as the new reaper. But he didn't want to stay in one place. He wanted to run around and fight. Cut down something with his scythe. So he traveled to the world of OverSoul to satisfy his never-ending blood lust

    Animations:
    Charge- He raises his scythe, then the Skull's eyes glow red
    Defend- A dark aura surrounds him, with blackish lightning sparking
    1 hit- Pierces the enemy with the tip of his scythe
    2 hit- Pierces the enemy with the tip of his scythe, then slashes downward
    3 hit- Pierces the enemy with the tip of his scythe, slashes downward, then shoots dark lightning at the enemy with his free hand
    5 hit- He turns into a shadowy figure then slashes the enemy once (But hitting 5 times)




    TRizZzCENTRINO -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/14/2013 23:12:01)

    2 of my character suggestions below, the Harbinger of souls and the Keeper of the damned:
    had 2 different colored versions(dunno which looks better)
    alternate version
    normal version




    Desmodus -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/14/2013 23:27:53)

    ^I prefer the normal versions myself. The red glow goes very well with the blue.




    DeathGuard -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/15/2013 2:05:26)

    quote:

    Entries:
    Gate Knight
    Valhas the Jinn Reaper
    Glacies the Ice Dragon
    Pyre Witch Legendary Form
    Mecha Moose
    Gate Keeper Rae
    Blud Nait
    Fluture
    Ralias the Elf
    Arcadia
    Fever Ray

    Newest Creations:
    Ambrosia
    Atlas
    Rhasgal

    Here are my entries for the contest, any feedback is welcome :D




    TRizZzCENTRINO -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/15/2013 3:48:35)

    @deathguard
    -gate knight: i like the concept and the drawing, however the hilt of the sword is too big.
    -Valhas the Jinn Reaper: i think the design isn't really that unique, and the design of the scythe is a bit random, lacking any actual shape that makes sense.
    -Glacies the Ice Dragon: design wise i must say that it is too simple and not really suiting the theme of ice, the amount of scales all over the body isn't really needed, the proportion of the rear also needs some improvements because it is too small.
    -Pyre Witch Legendary Form: too many random shapes going on there and they are not really comfortable to the eyes, the moon staff doesn't associate with the fire theme and design very well, without the description you couldn't tell that it is a fire themed character.
    -Mecha Moose: doesn't really fit oversoul, it looks like a G1 transformers or an early model of gundam, the design again is overly simple and looks very rigid.
    -Gate Keeper Rae: somehow resembles the Doc octopus in spiderman 2, the hair looks unnatural, the design itself is overly simple.
    -Blud Nait: i really like this, it is well colored and drawn, got nothing to say about this.
    -Fluture: the design resembles nothing to earth theme, it looks too bulky because of the gigantic wings, there are also many random shapes used that doesn't support the theme.
    -Ralias the Elf: the design isn't unique and it is too simple, i don't feel alot of creativity has gone into this, but i do like it because it is well drawn.
    -Arcadia: it is well drawn, perhaps you could shade it or color it in.
    -Fever Ray: too many random shapes, and the design is not really that appealing, i don't think it fits OS, my suggestion is to give it a more solid structure, better pose and spend time to plan out the design.
    Ambrosia: despite its simplicity, it is well drawn, design wise i'd say it doesn't suit to be the master rank.
    Atlas: even though some parts of it isn't drawn really well causing it to look strange, but the concept is interesting.
    Rhasgal: i quite like the design of this, one suggestion is that the feathers should increase in size since it is a human sized wing!

    this is my constructive feedback, i have taken my time to analyze each of your drawings closely you can take it or ignore it if you like, i do not mean any negativity they are simply me being honest.




    DeathGuard -> RE: =OS= Character Suggestion Discussion Thread (6/15/2013 12:34:15)

    @Trizz: Thanks Trizz, those help me a lot! :D




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