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RosenBlade -> (DF) Enough is Enough Discussion Thread (2/6/2013 20:07:59)

This is the first time I've posted a fic on this site, but I decided to give it a try. Anyways, Enough is Enough can be located here.



Glais -> RE: (DF) Enough is Enough Discussion Thread (2/6/2013 21:06:31)

Not a bad start. Writing was solid and luckily no walls of text.

I am wondering though, will this just be a recap of events in-game or is it going to take its own direction?



RosenBlade -> RE: (DF) Enough is Enough Discussion Thread (2/7/2013 1:42:50)

Hmm... I'm not quite sure.

However, the Hero of the story will be painted as being more... she is quite disillusioned about a few things. Before she used to be a reluctant hero but now she has become a determined one... with some anti-hero thrown into the mix. As you glimpsed from the one-shot, she is going to show no mercy towards Jaania and the Rose.

The war against Sepulchure, the Elemental Dissonance... and then being frozen in ice for five years to wake up to the Rose and their supporters? Yeah... did not do wonders for her.



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: (DF) Enough is Enough Discussion Thread (2/7/2013 5:55:41)

I cannot but agree with glaisaurus_x, it is a very nice chapter.

How many chapters do you have in mind for this story?



RosenBlade -> RE: (DF) Enough is Enough Discussion Thread (2/7/2013 11:14:51)

Hmm... this is originally a one-shot, but I do plan on continuing the story...

Not sure how many chapters the story would be, though...

All I can say is that the Hero will be a much harsher warrior than she was before.



Glais -> RE: (DF) Enough is Enough Discussion Thread (2/7/2013 17:17:18)

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this is originally a one-shot,

D: Well, perhaps you could look into other projects then?
You have a nice grasp on storytelling from what I can tell, would be interested in seeing more.



RosenBlade -> RE: (DF) Enough is Enough Discussion Thread (2/7/2013 17:25:18)

@ Glais

Hee, hee... thanks. Don't worry, I plan on continuing the story. Through a written version of Book 3. I'll also portray how the Hero feels about what has been going on during her absence and how she not only becomes determined... but anti-hero. Cause you know, there is only so much the Hero can put up with before they snap and start going extremist on everyone. Though she knows where to draw the line some of her friends will see her as being much harsher than before.



Warmonger Starsaber -> RE: (DF) Enough is Enough Discussion Thread (2/15/2013 23:41:59)

I like it, hope you continue, are you going to have your Hero escape Swordhaven, because in their she is Surrounded by Knights and Rose Soldiers, maybe show her leaving and they catch her, Fights them, but is surrounded but still breaks free, although is injured in the process, then saved by a NPC of your choosing ?, sorry I meant to say I really liked it and hope you continue the Story [:)].



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