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_Arceus_ -> Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/17/2013 19:38:45)

Like it? If so, comment what you think of here. Any corrections? Post it here. I'd love to see what your reaction on my story would be.



dragon_monster -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/17/2013 19:57:49)

Interesting it makes you wonder what is his story.



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/17/2013 20:41:02)

@dragon_monster, Thanks. That's the point of the story. Of how the main character searches for his lost memories.

Chapter 1, Werepyre, is up. Enjoy [:)]



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/18/2013 2:01:28)

Chapter 2, Death, is up. Enjoy [:)]



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/18/2013 6:49:48)

Chapter 3, New Life, is up. Enjoy [:)]



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/18/2013 11:54:01)

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I traveled through the werewolves lair, spying on the wolves that's been coming back and forth from their lair. I hid on the trees, not so far, but not so close from the werewolves lair. Fortunately, these wolves' sense of smell isn't that strong enough to smell my presence.

to(?), werewolves', in/behind, werewolves', wasn't

The second sentence (of the ones I quoted) sounds a bit a strange, I'd look into that one.

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I smiled to the thought of a werewolf, hiding from its pack.

at

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I guess we're after the same thing, cause when I followed the wolf, I saw it pouncing a Human, the same one I smelled blood in.

guessed we were

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Okay, I fell stupid now.

feel (Seeing this is a recollection of the memory and this is just in hindsight.)

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Maybe it's because I'm thirsty and want that Human for a snack, or I felt pity on that Human, fending off the werewolf on its own with no weapon......or so I thought.

for

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The rumors about it WAS true.

WERE (What were true?)

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Next thing I knew was I was sitting on a cave.

in(?)

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I can't actually make up the details, but, all I can remember before Wolfwing lunged at me, was an army of vampires, charging at him.

Save for Safiria, I cannot imagine Wolfwing to have had any trouble with tearing them to shreds.

I'm curious to see where this goes.



Glais -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/18/2013 18:18:21)

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Fortunately, these wolves' sense of smell isn't that strong enough to smell my presence.

But wouldn't smell be one of their strongest attributes?
Plot itself is kind of intriguing, though it is odd he can't remember why he died.
Seems like it'd be...I dunno, something crucial.

But that's probably a plot point.

Does feel a tad rushed to me so far though.



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/18/2013 19:17:32)

Answer time!
@Dwelling Dragonlord,
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(What were true?)

You know, the 'it exists' and 'it's stronger than an army of Vampires and Werewolves combined' kinds of rumors.
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Save for Safiria, I cannot imagine Wolfwing to have had any trouble with tearing them to shreds.

That's true. But what really happened is:
spoiler:

An army of Vampires, led by Christopher's brother (I'll reveal his identity soon, and how he managed to fend off Wolfwing.), charged at Wolfwing. They managed to fend him off, but lost a couple of Vampires in the process.


@Glais,
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But wouldn't smell be one of their strongest attributes?

Yes, yes it is. I 'added' a few more details to that part.
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Seems like it'd be...I dunno, something crucial.

And you are right. Well, actually, it was a quick death. But, there is something else that had killed him.

Anyways, thanks for the feedback [:)]
(Oh yeah, for the next following chapters, I'll be doing each character's POV's. If you don't know what POV means.............Well, I don't know either.)



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/18/2013 21:08:33)

Chapter 4's oh so long, Reunion, is up. Enjoy [:)]



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/19/2013 7:18:18)

Chapter 5's question answering, Reminisce, is up. Enjoy [:)]



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/20/2013 7:09:59)

Chapter 6's all out, Search, is here. Enjoy [:)]
(Oh yeah. Before I post the next chapter, I need to know if anyone is reading my story. I just need one little comment, just to see if anyone's reading this. I won't force you though. I'll just probably post the next chapter sooner or later, but it's good to know that someone's reading my story.)



dragon_monster -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/20/2013 17:42:36)

Is the hero of your story somoene who killed/displaced death or just a reaper beacouse if it is a reaper they should not be that surprised I mean there are a couple of creatures in the world of Lore who can deafeat the reaper I mean the ones that are stronger then the chosen.



araxia -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/20/2013 18:22:37)

@dragon monster: Well, you don't actually defeat the reaper. You just hold him off for a while. In AQ, he just toys around with you until he deems you worthy of continuing life. In AQW, you are the reaper, not Death. So, you don't really defeat Death. Actually, I doubt anyone could possibly kill Death, only subdue him for a few moments, and even then with large amounts of substantial power.


Hey Arceus, nice story. I'd like to know who Christopher's father is as well.



dragon_monster -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/20/2013 19:11:43)

Is there some spark between
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Cristpoher and Crystal[/spolier] or there might be or who knows[:D]



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/20/2013 21:44:40)

Okay. First of all, Awwwwwww Yeaaaaaahh. Someone IS reading my story. Second, I'll post up the 7th chapter very soon. Third,
@dragon_monster,
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Is the hero of your story somoene who killed/displaced death or just a reaper

Well......
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As you know, he took Death's scythe and sliced him in half after leaving. But, Death comes back to........un-life a few seconds after Christopher left. In other words, he didn't replace Death. He just took his scythe to get back to life and knowing that the scythe will eventually go back to Death. That's why he was shocked.

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Is there some spark between
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Christopher and Crystal or there might be or who knows

To answer that question.......There is, but only a little. And:
spoiler:

Toff (Christopher's little brother) is the one who's in love with Crystal. Same goes for Crystal, but they're both too shy to tell.

Looks like I killed the suspense there [:D]

@araxia,
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Well, you don't actually defeat the reaper. You just hold him off for a while. In AQ, he just toys around with you until he deems you worthy of continuing life. In AQW, you are the reaper, not Death. So, you don't really defeat Death. Actually, I doubt anyone could possibly kill Death, only subdue him for a few moments, and even then with large amounts of substantial power.

That's right. Although in AQW, the DoomWood part three (with the zombies and stuff), Sepulchure killed Death. And I don't understand how he did that.
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Hey Arceus, nice story. I'd like to know who Christopher's father is as well.

Thanks. And his father will be revealed soon.

So, thanks for the feedback.
This story scares me. I mean, it connects to the Devourer Saga and I haven't even played that part in the game. So.......
spoiler:

As you already guessed it, I shall add the Devourer Saga in the story. Yes, the whole Devourer Saga.........with a twist.



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/21/2013 1:12:45)

Alright. Because two people commented, I'll post a new chapter very soon (I'll still post it even if nobody commented though). So, for now......
Chapter 7's adventurous, Sage Uldor, is up. Enjoy [:)]



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/21/2013 6:56:22)

Okay, just as I said.
Chapter 8's cute, New Couple, is up. Enjoy [:)]



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/21/2013 8:36:18)

As a treat: Chapter 9's partly funny, Granemor, is up. Enjoy [:)]



araxia -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/21/2013 17:25:43)

So...Christopher discovers who he really is as he goes through the Devourer Saga?



dragon_monster -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/21/2013 18:02:29)

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To answer that question.......There is, but only a little. And:
spoiler:

spoiler:

Toff (Christopher's little brother) is the one who's in love with Crystal. Same goes for Crystal, but they're both too shy to tell.
Looks like I killed the suspense there


Oh that is great but the thing beafore the new chapters made me think about Cristopher made me think of him like a hero like Hercules, The Witcher fromm the witcher games,, the grey warden from dragon age if you make some good choices, the hero from jade empire if you make good choices also I think of Zeus also but i guess Toff deserves to have someone who loves him and loves her back.



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/21/2013 19:18:16)

Answer time!
@araxia,
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So...Christopher discovers who he really is as he goes through the Devourer Saga?

Yup. That's the plan (Well, coincidentally.)

One question to all my readers (even if it's not that many): What chapter are you at?



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/21/2013 20:39:17)

Due to its length, I've cut down chapter 9 in half and added it in:
Chapter 10, Dragonstone. Enjoy [:)]



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/21/2013 20:43:48)

Chapter 11's undead, Ribber, is up. Enjoy [:)]



araxia -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/21/2013 21:05:50)

You sir, write chapters extremely fast. By the way, I'm up to date.



_Arceus_ -> RE: Escaping Death Discussion Thread (2/22/2013 0:37:52)

@araxia, Well, this is what I do when I have nothing else to do [:D]



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