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Tep Itaki -> (AQ) The Itakis Discussion, Review or Critique Thread (2/19/2013 6:42:51)

(AQ) The Itakis

Table of Content


  • The Long Prologue
    1. The Hunters
  • Necromancers vs Paladins War Story

  • The Two Additions

  • The Truphma Camps

    This is my new writing project after my war story. Currently it is just an introduction to the characters and to their image. I plan to have music and image accompaniment, but still deciding if it's worth the time. However, the update to the story will happen when I have free time, the next term is about to start and I have a lot of plans and obligations to carry out this spring. So fair warning, updates to my story will be slow.

    If you wish to be PM'ed when a new chapter is up, feel free to say so here.

    Thank you and I appreciate any and all reviews critiques and/or comments on the story.



    • dragon_monster -> RE: (AQ) The Itakis Discussion, Review or Critique Thread (2/19/2013 8:08:14)

    Were is the link to your story?



    Tep Itaki -> RE: (AQ) The Itakis Discussion, Review or Critique Thread (2/19/2013 8:22:34)

    Ah, currently working on it. I lost all my progress when I forgot to save it to a separate program. Google Chrome does not like me. The chapter will be up as soon as possible. Sorry >.>;;

    EDIT: After dealing with technical difficulties, I have managed to post up the introduction of my story. Apologies for the inconvenience.



    dragon_monster -> RE: (AQ) The Itakis Discussion, Review or Critique Thread (2/19/2013 10:08:23)

    A question why whould the half werewolf and the half vampire be half only I mean can Constantine especialy him and Safiria give half a curse?



    Tep Itaki -> RE: (AQ) The Itakis Discussion, Review or Critique Thread (2/19/2013 16:55:47)

    Hmm..You got a point there but I think I should explain it more.



    Archmopecake -> RE: (AQ) The Itakis Discussion, Review or Critique Thread (3/11/2013 17:50:26)

    I don't have much useful to add but I really really admire your characterizations, and enjoyed reading the prologue a lot [:)]



    Elryn -> RE: (AQ) The Itakis Discussion, Review or Critique Thread (4/28/2013 21:31:07)

    *Elryn chuckles*

    I quite like the dysfunctional family Itaki's kin is turning out to be. It gave me a fair few chuckles.

    Edit: I read the introduction. I quite like how each character is unique in appearance and personality. I look forwards to it.



    Tep Itaki -> RE: (AQ) The Itakis Discussion, Review or Critique Thread (5/11/2013 23:20:05)

    Many thanks you two and as Elryn pointed out, I should visit here more. But I'm currently stuck a bit on how to approach the section "The Long Prologue"



    Tep Itaki -> RE: (AQ) The Itakis Discussion, Review or Critique Thread (6/26/2013 8:21:18)

    Realized there are some things I need to read over and re-edit again as some parts clash with another.


    Paladins vs Necromancer
    Found issues with Edge of Extinction war story and will get around to fixing that


    Truphmas
    Almost done with story after remembering what exactly happens after Tep gets off the ship



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