(AQW) Then, it Fireballed. (Full Version)

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abcghimno -> (AQW) Then, it Fireballed. (3/29/2013 12:31:03) The story is over here. I'd like help with grammar or bad phrasing. When I end up putting NPCs in (it's inevitable!), I'd also like to know when they're out of character/how to make them more in character. I have a bad habit of writing things in a way that makes events speed by, so help with that would be appreciated as well.

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Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: (AQW) Then, it Fireballed. (3/30/2013 8:48:48) The first chapter looks fine to me, keep it up I would say.

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abcghimno -> RE: (AQW) Then, it Fireballed. (3/31/2013 1:44:11) Thanks! Anyway, I'm afraid the two most recent chapters I've put up have been mostly filler, but hopefully something will happen in the next.

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abcghimno -> RE: (AQW) Then, it Fireballed. (4/23/2013 1:24:51) Unfortunately, I'm rather stuck in filler land again... [X(] I have something planned that should come up soon. ...Possibly. Oh, who am I kidding? It'll take a while what with school and real life.

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abcghimno -> RE: (AQW) Then, it Fireballed. (5/21/2013 0:12:09) Whoo look, something mildly interesting happened in the story. New chapter! Finally. I'd appreciate a critique. :/

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