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The Hollow Soul -> RE: Wishing for a Dream Commentary (4/24/2013 20:54:34)
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From Now On: (#6)
- The flow on this one is the only thing I don’t like, and that could all be on me for how my mind is reading it.
I’m Feeling Alright: (#3)
- I enjoy this one a lot, I can easily picture a story along with the verses and it flows great.
Knight: (#4)
- I like the flow of this one, it’s quickly paints a nice picture of the knight and his surroundings and tells a nice quick story.
Stars: (#2)
- Stars is awesome, it greatly shows the mysteries of a star, the fact that we as humans can ever get to them, they’ll always be out of human reach, but they can still lead a lost or confused soul on a path in a figurative way.
It’s Just a Normal Day: (#5)
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In My Mind: (#1)
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(I'll get to #5 and #1 in a little bit!)
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