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King Helios -> Valentine's Day 2014: Oz's Android (5/27/2013 13:59:16)

*name could be changed to something less cheesy*
When Oz and his Apprentice Tech Mage, Calissa, challenged Caden, Calissa almost died. However, throughout the years, she has gotten to a medical center, and been healed.

Years later, the Exiles challenged the Legions for control of the lucrative mining center known as the Infernal Mines. Calissa couldn't wait to get revenge on her foes, the Legion, so she asked to be put in an advance scouting party. Her leader accepted, and she went back to the first vault.

"Wow, look at this vault! I wonder what is inside," said Calissa's old friend, Anya.

"Yes, but be careful. I'm sure the Legion has put a defense sys..."

Calissa's words were cut off by two sharp rocks shooting up from the ground. One impaled Anya in the forehead, knocking her against the hard stone ground, bleeding. The other hit Calissa in the knee. Suddenly, a group of Legion soldiers burst out from the cavern behind them.

Their commander, Kirdo, said to his soldiers, "The tall one is dead. Take the other to the back. We can make her an Android."

And then the soldiers dragged Calissa into the distance.

After the war, Oz visits the Infernal Android seller.

"No charge for you, leader," said the Exile Soldier, and Oz took the android.

Later that day, an Exile cadet challenged Oz. He decided, "Oh, this would be a good time to test my bot!" And he used it. The Android jumped out...and.... 
"Master, I do not attack Exiles."

*dun dun dunnn*
Credit for this portion goes to Mother1, Nercormantres, King Helios, and Dual Thrusters. All writing is my own. I do not own EpicDuel.




Dual Thrusters -> RE: Valentine's Day 2014: Oz's Android (5/27/2013 14:05:42)

This sort-of reminds me of Ulysses and Galatea, now that I think about it.



King Helios -> RE: Valentine's Day 2014: Oz's Android (5/27/2013 14:08:18)

Now that you say that, it does!



mr.c00ldude -> RE: Valentine's Day 2014: Oz's Android (5/27/2013 14:11:46)

sounds good, but may be a little too bloody for the little 8 year olds that play this game lol



Necromantres -> RE: Valentine's Day 2014: Oz's Android (5/27/2013 14:13:44)

quote:

"O..o....o......z? I....am.....A....n......y...a..." said the android.
*dun dun dunnn*
doesn't really fit does it? i mean how could she been alive after the IA transformation. and you got it wrong, Anya isn't a mage it's a mercenary in the room with hank.Calissa it's the love of his life and his appretice.
quote:

Caden's treachery lead to the death of Oz's best friend, a hulking man named Royce Armand, and also the death of the love of his life, an apprentice Tech Mage named Calissa.



It would be better if the story would be centred on Calissa. since Baelius made tha IA one of them could have been Calissa from all that we know...As for the story for valentine, like i said in the discussion in my oppinion it would been better if the Calissa IA would have something broken ,special that made you get it free from someone...She survived the process and a part of her memory remained intact due to the fact that she is a tech mage and in the last time she was able to comunicate to the machines and overload their part with energy...however making that move along with tha IA transformation made her unconscionus or in other words that part of her memory it's inactive....


When Oz finds out that Calissa was made an IA she think that you killed her when you destroyed tha Vault..In the epic battle in the last moment you use that IA on Oz that part of her memory gets activated and she regain conscious but she can't leave the IA form without help...In those moment of desperation you need to take the fight To Baelius , fight him along with Oz and Callisa and ask how to revert the process..He however refuse to speak and you need do ask help from the Unknown Bacon Lover..Yup...You go to Titan the mighty mage.


Also since
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Caden's treachery lead to the death of Oz's best friend, a hulking man named Royce Armand, and also the death of the love of his life, an apprentice Tech Mage named Calissa.
females could get an Royce Armand version of this or even better in all those years you find out Royce survived and he may be the one that make Oz listen to you..Or even better maybe a betrayal...Finding out Royce it's actualy on of Baelius soldier that changed his appearance to look like him with an unknown process that may or may not by the one that transforms people in IA.



King Helios -> RE: Valentine's Day 2014: Oz's Android (5/27/2013 14:16:33)

^ Ok, sorry. I got confused a bit buy Char's story. Editing.

Edited, with my own alternate ending and corrections for Calissa.



Necromantres -> RE: Valentine's Day 2014: Oz's Android (5/27/2013 14:21:58)

Np..i wonder what Char would say about this story..i for one i'll love to see implemented if not a saga or a war at least a few mission to forward the storyline...



Stabilis -> RE: Valentine's Day 2014: Oz's Android (5/27/2013 14:52:04)

Because we hear of so many "good endings" or "happily ever afters", could you please end this as a tragedy? It does not have to be all bad though, you can still mix hope into it.

Example: Calissa is doomed to forever be an Android, or even destroyed, but at least Oz gets to meet her 1 last time and relive their interrupted relationship. Oz moves on with his life, while improving as a person, and a leader of the Exiles.



King Helios -> RE: Valentine's Day 2014: Oz's Android (5/27/2013 15:11:29)

I haven't ended the story yet. However, I'll keep that in mind. Thanks!

EDIT: I'd be very grateful if someone could help me whth how the story should progress.



Necromantres -> RE: Valentine's Day 2014: Oz's Android (5/27/2013 15:17:58)

It depends on how you want to progress and what road do you want it to take...I may be able to write something.



King Helios -> RE: Valentine's Day 2014: Oz's Android (5/27/2013 21:04:53)

What Dep. void said sounds great! ^ PM me and we can start.



Necromantres -> RE: Valentine's Day 2014: Oz's Android (5/28/2013 8:50:55)

for a tragedy we could try his ideea..or something like Callisa could recover her body but at Oz sacrifice (in the process or by someone hands) You could make something like in the process of recovering her body Baelius or Alydriah atack the building where you are to stop you...While you an oz must defend it from them..oz could die in the battle (a rough ideea but might work)



King Helios -> RE: Valentine's Day 2014: Oz's Android (5/28/2013 18:27:34)

Actually, screw it, the devs can come up with the writing.

Comments about the concept?



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