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flashbang -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/3/2013 14:31:02)

@ss You can link directly to your post. Just click on the post number and it will give you a link.



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/3/2013 14:37:28)

^Oh, I got it... Its from MiB3, The arcanian dude's



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/3/2013 14:50:43)

I don't know how you have managed to get your fifth chapter up already ss2195! I am still in the process of writing my third [&:]

This chapter is going to be slightly dark as well. It is narrated by 0Neo and there will be a lot of thoughts from him in this chapter.

It might be out tonight, but it will likely be out late tomorrow evening because I am working tomorrow.



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/3/2013 15:07:32)

@tommy2468: I started quite a dew days before you! But I must admit you are one fast writer!



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/3/2013 15:31:47)

Oh right, I thought you had only started like a day or two before me :L



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/4/2013 16:31:36)

Chapter Three is finally up, sorry about the wait :)



darksaber22 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/4/2013 16:45:53)

@tommy loved that chapter and it looks like this team might have some trouble before they trust each other and i can't wait to see were this goes so nice job and great use of the tension between them



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/4/2013 16:50:05)

@darksaber22 Thanks, I couldn't really work on it earlier today so I felt a little rushed (I know there's no pressure but I want to try and give myself a little more structure during summer :P)

And if you were wonderin; Adrian is not allied with Hikari Yume in any way. He really only wanted to prevent his home from being destroyed and he thought the more destructive of those fighting were Popinloopy and Seth



darksaber22 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/4/2013 16:52:44)

@tommy well it would be a horrible start to alliance if the meeting place was destroyed XD but anyway try not to rush yourself your chapters have been really good so far so take as much time as you need



dragonfire1423 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/4/2013 17:00:49)

@tommy: I really like what you did with the characters in this story, and it really goes to show, as I said somewhere else in this thread, that 100 different people can do 100 different things with a character, and so long as it fits the mood, all scenarios work.



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/4/2013 17:03:04)

@darksaber Again thanks, it's good to hear that someone is enjoying it so far :)

@dragonfire1423 I'm going to be using Salem as a quiet but clever individual, who fights on the side of unity in any wars :P Hope you liked my introduction of Salem



dragonfire1423 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/4/2013 19:13:13)

I am looking forward to it! I made the character of Salem to have a comic-style cannon concept, a CSCC if you will, to where nothing that happens in any story is in the same universe, without it being expressly mentioned. Kinda like the Zelda Timeline where there are several timelines that happen based on events that happened in previous games/stories.



0Neo -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/4/2013 22:28:48)

@tommy2468 yet again you surprise me with your skills. What makes this chapter better, and I'm dead serious about this, is the way you could portray my character better than I did. Due to personal reasons, I've always tend to make things work out just fine and be happy and all that stuff when I truly want to create something like what you did. The way you really present 0Neo and his ideals remind me of the personality the character I created (in which 0Neo is based) has by the middle of his history whereas I made my story with the personality of my character's final version (the reason 0Neo is understanding of others and fights for Unity)

I believe we both saw truth in the elements (might not be the case, but this game was my first real experience with the concept) and I'm truly pleased knowing someone else thinks a little bit like me.

I have to say, you would be a great clan leader for Glacius whereas I still feel I'm unfit

your story is my favorite right now. Keep up the good.....no, the marvelous work



dragonfire1423 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/4/2013 22:53:23)

@Tommy: on behalf of all of us who've read your story (whether they like me speaking for them or not) I have to congratulate you. You've won the hearts of all of us, and have truly created a masterpiece with only ~10 pages of work! I think all of us will be paying attention to your work more than any others, and we hope to see more when you get done!

@0Neo:
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I have to say, you would be a great clan leader for Glacius whereas I still feel I'm unfit

Don't you DARE get all sappy on me now! Who'd I annoy when you're gone? Who'd I make VERBALLY try and get me to stop playing on the forums? (^w^)
I may be done with my stay in Paxia Ambassador...ing... But you're still sittin' there, so stop pretending to be so serious!



0Neo -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/4/2013 23:03:06)

@dragonfire1423 *sigh* I said I had my doubts about Nocturu's future and my involvement in it. There's no way I'll leave.........I was just expressing some of my inner demons about my confidence but I'll pretty much do what I did (well, trying to do) IRL: do what I truly want and face the consequences later. Perhaps I'll create another filler chapter just for the fun of it. I am serious Salem, but that doesn't mean I cannot fool around sometimes :P (not good at making smilies though)



dragonfire1423 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/4/2013 23:10:46)

You're fine at making smilies, me and Shii just seem to be the best at it <(°□°<) ^(°□°)^ (>°□°)>

Don't worry about confidence. Number one rule I have: You're on the internet. It's fine to act like an idiot more than usual, since no one cares.

Hmm... I think I'd like to take a break and read some... YOU HEAR THAT AFK PEOPLE!? MAKE MOAR CHAPS! (╯°□°）╯ ┻━┻

Well, unless something is either keeping you from writing, or you don't want to... No rush (^w^)

ON-TOPIC:
Dun feel liek writin', so I'm on hiatus for [undisclosed period]



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/5/2013 3:59:46)

Wow thanks for the support everyone [:)] I've always been a fan of books that were not afraid to kill characters. It keeps the readers on their feet and unexpecting. Obviously I would never kill off a character without said person's permission, because its something so final and so heart-wrenching that I wouldn't feel right doing that to someone's character.

If there is anyone who is okay with the possibility (just the possibility, giving the permission does not mean they will die :P) of their character dying then send me a PM. That way only you and I will know, and there won't be any spoilers :D

Thanks everyone again so much :D



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/5/2013 4:12:56)

@Tommy2468: Great story so far, And I love the way you've turned the reresentatives into a volatile chemical mixture! Can wait to see wait happen next!



battlemaster25 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/6/2013 1:29:43)

Chapter IV: The Cavalry has just been posted. This one was partially a test of my skills at writing banter.



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/6/2013 4:36:40)

@battlemaster25 Finally got a chance to read your full war story and I really like your character Storm. You've presented him in a very good way (perhaps with a possible relationship with the girl from Igneus [;)] )



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/6/2013 10:22:23)

Part 6: Elements Decieved: The fatal Flaw is up.

Really hope it gives you a good idea, about what's actually going on!
And a hint about Paxus's gift~



darksaber22 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/6/2013 10:42:13)

@ss2195 well that was a long read but an interesting one it had a lot of action in and i liked the explaining of the plan with adrian so another good chapter ss



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/6/2013 10:59:46)

Realised that I have my comments about the war story in the wrong place :L

@ss2195 Your battles are soooo good XD To get each person in a chapter involved in a battle seems like such a difficult task but you flew through it flawlessly!

And come on what's Paxus' gift?!!! I'm dying to know :O Just a little clue, please!!!



Seth Hydra -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/6/2013 11:01:13)

^Thanks again!
Ive already answered your question in AQGD thread



tommy2468 -> RE: =AQ= Xov's Assault stories and poetry Commentary (7/6/2013 11:03:39)

@ss2195 A drill you say... To be handled by Abaraa... This could be brilliant, or disastrous [:o]



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