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Therril Oreb -> (DF) The Raven Shifting clan - The 10 black feathers (7/13/2013 11:26:24)

Some people have shown interest to see more of the Raven Shifting clan I like to refer to all the time so I have started a story around it here.
I'm still human so errors are likely to happen so feel free to discuss and point things out. :D

I haven't put my other story completely aside but some change is nice :)

Also, any requests can be asked as well if you like a personal touch of yourself in here. Just post it here or PM me [;)]



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: (DF) The Raven Shifting clan - The 10 black feathers (7/14/2013 6:08:52)

Why didn't the "overall leader" confront Ramon when he usurped the Oreb throne?



Therril Oreb -> RE: (DF) The Raven Shifting clan - The 10 black feathers (7/14/2013 17:34:56)

Therril's father was the overall leader. But as explained, Ramon usurped the throne with brute strength when nobody saw it coming.
Corvus C. Oreb was the overall leader in this story but he long died and Revondil was the former leader during Therril's life.

Also, keep in mind that this story will take place a hundred years before Therril's story even began. This story is entirely meant to show some of the society of the Raven Shifting clan.
So yes it is canon to background information but it is not canon for the events that happened in Therril's life.

You will also notice some contradictions between the two stories in the future though these will be explained some other time.



Corvus Corax -> RE: (DF) The Raven Shifting clan - The 10 black feathers (7/15/2013 8:06:34)

Wow Therril I really like this and can't wait for more! I love that Corvus is neutral, because that's what Corvus would be. :)



Therril Oreb -> RE: (DF) The Raven Shifting clan - The 10 black feathers (7/15/2013 12:29:27)

Thanks Corvus. As a fellow raven lover, the position was fitting :p
Chapter 2 is done and I like this different style of writing. I don't know where this will be headed yet myself but it'll be interesting ^^



Dwelling Dragonlord -> RE: (DF) The Raven Shifting clan - The 10 black feathers (7/16/2013 6:36:31)

quote:

Torches flickering in the cold wind still area.

What are you trying to say here?

quote:

Melissa: Oh, I am writing a book to spread our culture so that we will never disappear from the grasps of time.

This sounds like it goes directly against the wishes of Corvus.

quote:

Corvus: I know I know. He wants our forces to be stronger, to have a single unity instead of nine islands. To show the power of our clan to the outside. But I don't want any of that. The clan is peaceful and happy. It is not perfect but outside contact might ruin this peace. And Nommar knows I am against his and his family's wishes. And they wouldn't dare doing anything stupid to get through with this!


quote:

*The guard quickly rushes in the room.*

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Therril Oreb -> RE: (DF) The Raven Shifting clan - The 10 black feathers (7/16/2013 17:43:23)

Nicely noticed DD. Corrected it.
Also, I meant a wind still area as in an area where there is no wind blowing.[;)]



Therril Oreb -> RE: (DF) The Raven Shifting clan - The 10 black feathers (7/17/2013 7:11:01)

Well, chapter 4 is done ^^



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